Come the Revolution - Chapter 3

[themolesmother]

Tracey Davis - Slytherin, Muggleborn and Essex girl. This is her story, and the story of a revolution in the making.

Chapter 2

Having decided to go back to Hogwarts after all, Tracey must now face the consequences of her decision …

3. Childhood’s End

When I was a child, I spake as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child: but when I

Comments

[snorkackcatcher]

I must admit, I had to go and re-read the first two parts to refresh my memory about what was going on. :) However, having done that it's still nicely written and an intriguing setup (perhaps a bit backstory-heavy here with the Moons?) and I really want to find out what the 'Mudblood Revolt' will be! I rather like Tracey as a character, and it's a good take on the interaction between the two worlds.

[themolesmother]

Thanks for the feedback. I hope you won't be disappointed in the Mudblood Revolt when it happens :-).

Re the Moons - yes, reading it over I see what you mean. I'm afraid I rather fell in love with them - I'll bear your point in mind when I edit for submission to Fiction Alley.

MM

[nineveh_uk]

Another one who had to nip back and look at previous episodes, but well worth it. I liked the Moons, but they did come a bit out of no-where. Stick a mention or two of Tim in the preceding chapters? And what, I wonder to myself, is going to happen with Isabelle...

Glad you thought it was worth it

[themolesmother]

Stick a mention or two of Tim in the preceding chapters?

Thanks for the suggestion - I think that is a very good idea. I can probably slot their first meeting in to Chap 1 without breaking the continuity.

As for Isabelle? Afraid you'l have to wait and see ...

MM

[dolorous_ett]

I'm too tired to write a proper review - but I couldn't not leave a line to say how much I'm enjoying your story. It's a rare treat to read something genuinely original, and Tracy's an interesting and complex character.

Roll on the next installment!

Thank you!!

[themolesmother]

Your comments are much appreciated.

I'm enjoying myself with it at the moment so hopefully the next installment will take shape during the Christmas holidays.

MM

[cateagle]

Definitely getting to be an interesting story, but I'd reckon you should include a link to the first part, too; just for convenience of newcomers like myself if nothing else. 'Twill be most interesting to see how this develops and the idea of a "Mudblood Revolt" germinates and grows. I suspect some Slytherins may be quite surprised and what's been there right beside them and they were too blind to see.

[themolesmother]

Thanks for your kind comments. I know what you mean about links - I've been meaning to put them in for ages but being technologically inept I need to do some research on how first.

Hope you will continue following the story as it unfolds.

MM