Adult Fic: "Checking Her Oil"

May 28, 2012 22:14


Title: "Checking Her Oil"
Author: theothardus
Character(s)/pairings: Ed, Winry
Rating: NC-17. CONTAINS XXX , SO BE FOREWARNED.
Summary: Ed and Winry experiment in the early months of their marriage.
Disclaimer: I only steal the unwritten drabbles from Arakawa's mind. MINDF*CK'D |'D
A/N: /hasnotwrittenalemoninalongtime :'|

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fullmetal alchemist, winry, ed, edwin, lemon

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seizansha May 29 2012, 19:40:32 UTC
for something so hot i could stop laughing, it's just so them!

p.s. do you have a deviantART account? i wanna post 'Prodigy' over there, proper creds and all.

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theothardus May 29 2012, 21:40:51 UTC
Haha! :D

I do - the username is ebonyivoryy. Have you posted it yet? I'll read it if I could find it.~

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seizansha May 31 2012, 01:16:39 UTC
i will in a few minutes but it's already in my lj if you wanna look. ^-^

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evil_little_dog May 30 2012, 00:21:02 UTC
Very, very hot! :D

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theothardus May 30 2012, 00:35:43 UTC
Thank ya! ;D

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vince_moon May 30 2012, 01:25:06 UTC
"Checking for oil", I LOVE that!

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theothardus May 30 2012, 03:05:17 UTC
Hehe - I thought people might. xD

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sindsyglolita June 3 2012, 10:21:11 UTC
Beeep, love it! <3 And "Checking for oil" ? Perfect!! xD

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theothardus June 3 2012, 23:05:49 UTC
Thanks! <3 Hehe, I heard the term and it immediately reminded me of EdxWin.

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miss_auto1621 June 8 2012, 05:04:52 UTC
18 and free!!

My God. This wasn't hot. This was something else. More than just hot. It set my computer on fire!!

"Shit, what did Winry say about correlating love and alchemy-?!" Um, you're a dork? Maybe? Just saying.

Wow. This should win an award for Best Sex Scene from a Fic/ Best Lemon from a fic. The idea of oral was just wow.

...That may sound sick, but Ed's experimenting. Let him experiment!

Loved it. :D

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theothardus June 9 2012, 04:03:04 UTC
Ahahaha! Yeah, Ed is just a teenie-bitty-dork. Just a teenie-bitty.

Oh, not the flattery, I'm blushing. ^3^

I was originally planning to do a normal sex scene, but then thought I might as well spice it up!

Hehe~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much! <3

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miss_auto1621 June 9 2012, 04:07:46 UTC
Define 'a teenie-bitty-dorky' please. XD

Oh, yes, the flattery! Recognize where recognition is deserved. I hope my translation makes sense.

You just added, like, 500 kinds of hot sauce and Mexican salsas on here, but that's okay.

Welcome!

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