Journey

Jun 20, 2005 01:57

Run the gauntlet
Explore the trail
that extra mile
the holy grail
grab the torch
and pass it on
sweat a river
the road is long

Don't give up
come on my friend
it's almost over
you're near the end
the treasure waits
but it isn't fair
You finished life
and nothing's there.

(it came out differently then what was originally in my head.. hmm..)

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killmequietly June 20 2005, 02:42:09 UTC
I like it's simplicity.
Makes it beautiful.

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miss you xgutterflowerx June 20 2005, 12:21:04 UTC
i think it's absolutely amazing.

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thepurestsin June 21 2005, 01:27:33 UTC
Thank you both.. :)

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porcelain____ August 19 2005, 01:29:08 UTC
simply wonderful.

somewhat like you,
minus the wonderful.
jk.

haha just add me.

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