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[thirdonebetween]

in the shadows of tall buildings.
kangin/eeteuk.
pg-13; 1,885 words.
(☆)

Comments

[coyotecolored]

Oh man. This is beautiful, and heartbreaking. ._. Chronic illness can be such a difficult subject to handle with sensitivity, but you did an amazing job of it.

[thirdonebetween]

thank you so much. ♥ it was a bit of a struggle to write, because there's always the danger of crossing over into the cliche or the tactless, but I'm glad it came out okay.

[s7nluv]

is eeteuk sick?...the whole time i was reading i kept expecting someone to die or something. This whole thing is so depressing but so beautiful...

[s7nluv]

nvm...i know he's sick now...i juss clicked the other link...

[thirdonebetween]

thank you~ ♥ I'm glad you liked it.

and yeah, the little link under the title explains the disease. :] I didn't want it to be all flashy and ugly, so I hope most people notice it. ^^;;

[scylladakylla]

Oh my fucking god. This was amazing. I will leave a more coherent comment, since I have to be in class in half an hour, but god, this was amazing.

[thirdonebetween]

thank you so much. ♥ I'm glad you liked it. and I hope your class went well~~ :]

[scylladakylla]

Okay, I'm back. Yes, class went well, thank you. ^_^

That was beautiful. I loved your writing before and was sad that you only had a couple of fics on miracle______. You have this way of making things so damn real and poetic and heartbreaking, I envy you. Gah. I wanted to leave a more coherent comment about specific parts I liked, but that's not going to happen. *flails around wordlessly with love* ♥

[thirdonebetween]

yaaaaay. ^^ I'm glad.

thank yooouu. ♥ I'm an incredibly slow writer, and I barely ever finish things. :/ and the things I finish have usually been sitting around for months. but, I am hoping to work on that. XD thank you so much for such a nice comment. the best thing about writing is it know that people enjoy reading it as much as you enjoy writing it. ♥

[thirdonebetween]

haha, I'm glad. ♥ it's angst, but I tried to make the ending a little hopeful, at least. or something. XD;

thank you. :] I'm glad you like it and it could make your day better. ♥

[kelseypaige]

Uhm, hi ♥

"Hmmmm." Kangin makes a big show of thinking, then leans down and sings softly against Eeteuk's cheek: "I love you, baby, and I'm never gonna stop." That, I think, sums this entire thing up in one sentence. I don't want to ramble but I think I might.

I don't like Kangin. Or, I mean, I don't like KangTeuk. I have banners about how much I dislike it. I don't read KangTeuk. I have such a large KangTeuk-itis, that I'll read a fic with it in it and skip over the parts that are touchy feely. And guess what? I read this entire thing. Every. Single. Word. And I even re-read a few of them.

This makes me sad. But really, it makes me happy, because it's so ... real. Eeteuk is sick and Kangin goes off to mack with Heechul - that may have been my absolute favorite part, and not because it ruins the KT! ...really.

But I lie, because For the first time in months, Eeteuk cries. that is my fav part. Mmm, and I dont think I need to clarify myself

[thirdonebetween]

ohgoodess. ♥ thank you!

I'm so glad you gave this fic a chancde even though you're not a fan of the pairing; to me, it means even more that you liked it then. I think I would rather someone like my work despite the pairing instead of because of the pairing any day. ♥

if I may confess, the heechul scene was my favorite part to write. XD I'm just a sucker for dysfunction. I'm glad it seems real to you; it's based off real things. ♥

thank you so much for the wonderful comment. ♥ you made me smile so much.