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[thirdonebetween]

in the shadows of tall buildings.
kangin/eeteuk.
pg-13; 1,885 words.
(☆)

Comments

[x_voracity]

OMG Wow. ♥
I don't usually read Suju fics but this was recc's by kelsey so I was like o0olala~.
It tugged at my heart so badly (or so much? whichever.)
Favorite lines:
1.and wonders how ironic it is that he's not the sick one. Not really.
2.For the first time in months, Eeteuk cries.
3.but the words that once seemed so powerful just feel dry and hollow in his mouth.
This whole thing was just so lovely and such a pleasure to read. It wasn't overly dramatic or overly sad - it was just right. I loved the ending and imagined it with the whole fadeout scene :D.

[thirdonebetween]

haaaa I'm talking to you in gabbly right now. :] ♥

thanks so much. ♥! I'm glad you liked iiiiit even if you don't read suju fic often. :]

[taylormercury]

You ... you ... God, it doesn't matter what pairing you write, I always end up falling completely in love with your stories, and this one is no exception.

This was ... it was such a simple read, nothing particularly flashy or dramatic happened, and yet there was this wealth of emotion underlying it all. I really liked the way you wrote this ... I don't even know what to say actually, you've just made my brain basically go "guuuuh". I loved the characterization, the way you described their relationship together, the things Kangin does/did for Eeteuk, thinks about him, the things he says. I always get this feeling that Kangin takes care of Eeteuk anyway, but you took this a step further by making Eeteuk seem fragile and vulnerable and more in need of the care than usual.

And this wasn't particularly angsty or emo, either, really. Sad, of course, but absolutely beautiful. And I really don't know what else to say now, but if you keep on writing things like this, I'm afraid you'll end up making me change my mind about KangTeuk XD

[thirdonebetween]

oh, wow. ♥ thanks so much!

I'm not very good at flashy. dramatic, maybe, but flashy not so much - I'm too paranoid of making something sound overdramatic or cliche. so I try to stay low-key and realistic, and I'm glad it apparently worked for you. :] and, it always makes me really happy to get compliments about charactization, because I really feel that characterization is the most important thing in a story. ♥!

I adore kangteuk, as long as it doesn't get boring, so I would certainly not be opposed to pulling a good writer over to my side. >] maybe I'll crank out another one sometime.

thanks so much for such a sweet comment. ♥ I'm glad you liked it!

[booshoo]

hey genius. ♥ you know how much i love this already, but it never hurts to say it again:

ILU, & THIS FIC, & - !!!

...and now i leave for work

[thirdonebetween]

iluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ♥♥♥

good luck at work. :// ♥

[kyuppuccino]

This was very, very, very beautiful and refreshing. There are many sentences that made me appreciate this story, yet I'm not going to include all of them in this comment or it would look too cluttered; the point is that I definitely enjoy your writing. I especially liked the balcony scenes. Amazing work. :) ♥

[tokawaii]

The style of writing that you use is so elegant and beautiful and completely natural. Most people have to try and make their work flow, but the way you do it is like silk. I think it's the emotions a story can make you feel that makes it successful; this one is truly one of the best.

[thirdonebetween]

wow, thank you. ♥ I'm so glad you liked it. when I'm writing, I get the feeling that I've developed a distinct style without really meaning to... so I'm glad it's a style that works and that people can enjoy. :] thanks so much!