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kagoume November 29 2013, 02:26:32 UTC
'drowning them back in the familiar childhood nostalgia Kyungsoo wishes he could live in instead of this reality he's been trying to avoid'
'Jongin is staring at him, and even with the distance between them Kyungsoo can still see his heart breaking in his eyes'
'Kyungsoo tries his hard to keep his smile on as he sees the only face he cares for walk out of the ballroom'

those three sentences breaks my heart my chest went trough pain when i'm reading this fic this is so beautiful
you're known for your kaisoo fluff, but maybe its good to go out of your 'fluff' box and write another genre to avoid the monotonic, predictable and cliche plot because honestly this is so beautiful :')

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thisismylastlie November 29 2013, 18:49:39 UTC
thank you so much! i'm sorry for breaking your heart ;A;
ah yeah the fluff title actually rlly annoys me LOL but i accept it because i kind of brought it upon myself without meaning to /shrugs. thank you, thank you!! :)

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ancoats November 29 2013, 09:36:08 UTC
hOLY GOD SAVE mEEEEEEEEEEEEEe uhghhhh this was so good oh my god. i feel like it was paced just wonderfully and you summed up everything perfectly--EVEN THOUGH IT WAS SAD it was fitting and even though happy endings are nice, sadly, they are not always what people get in life.. ;_____; im going to reread this forever and ever omggGGG UGH YOU'RE SO TALENTED!!! thank you so much for sharing! ;______________;

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thisismylastlie November 29 2013, 18:50:07 UTC
thank you so much for your kind comment!! :'D

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ikik09 November 29 2013, 23:24:55 UTC
Authornim, my heart hurts :(

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thisismylastlie November 30 2013, 19:30:14 UTC
i'm sorry ;A; /gives you a band aid and some ice cream and some kaisoo to be safe
thank you for reading! <3

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amiyourprincess November 30 2013, 09:00:11 UTC
But Jongin knew something about MILITARY SRATEGIEEEES!!! He could've helped!!! How did Kyungsoo missed that?!!
I was so looking forward to Jongin as the military adviser the moment I read about his interest;__; (WAS THIS GOING TO BE THE SEQUEL?!!)
I am forever crying at this. ;________;
This needs a happier ending where they'd just be both stripped of their titles and live in some far away forest and have their happy ever after.
No I'm sorry. HAHAHAHA.
This is so great. You are so G-R-E-A-T! All the love:)

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thisismylastlie November 30 2013, 19:29:52 UTC
LOL kyungsoo didn't really miss that but it was more like kyungsoo didn't want to go to war to begin with so jongin's knowledge of military strategies wouldn't have helped tbh ;A;
i gave the readers false hope heheheheheh i never plan for sequels, but perhaps that is the sequel in your ~mind~? :D

OMG TBH i actually originally planned a really happy ending like there was no war in the alternative fic tho and jongin broke up the wedding and etc. but i was like, ".... wow that would really......... suck if i did that." because it just didn't make sense T_T

thank you so much for reading :D

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amiyourprincess December 1 2013, 05:33:50 UTC
Yeah that would totally not make any sense. Like everything will be done in a puff of smoke. HAHA.
thank you so much for continuing to write and everything;__;

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starsthatlast November 30 2013, 14:28:00 UTC
sCREAMS OMFG AMY i was wandering through your tumblr and lj aND I SAW THIS OMG YOU FINALLY POSTED THIS

KING!AU

I'M

i have this image of sad yet wise old king kyungsoo (omg it even has a nice rhyme to it) sitting on the throne with sad jongin somewhere but then suddenly this antique portrait-esque image shatters into some lolita kaisoo fluff i can't

CRIES YOU WROTE KAISOO I'M SOBS i want to write too but cries idk why i just can't find the words lately ;__;

AND THIS IS LATE BUT HAPPY THANKSGIVING <3 thank you for existing and being such a wonderful person my dear ilu ;3;

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thisismylastlie November 30 2013, 19:27:49 UTC
SCREAMS PEI YES THE PAIN HAS ENDED i kind of expected more out of this fic bUT idk i just can't write dear T_T sobs writing is just taking so much more out of me than it used to tbh

that's the perfect image so... heart shattering o.o

cRIES it's okay dear i know words can hide sometimes bUT YOU WILL FIND THEM because words love you because who wouldn't love you dear?

sobs thank you dear TTTT_TTTT happy thanksgiving too! do you guys celebrate it too...? sorry i don't know T_T i'm thankful for a sweet friend like you who's always there for me and everyone else because she's just too kind to not help!! yay for mindmates/cheesemates for life!! <3

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