OKAY. I A M BACK. I READ THIS WHOLE FIC ON THE WAY HOME FROM UNI. AND I STARTED FCUKING CRYING ON THE BUS. LIKE. LEGIT TEARS WERE COMING OUT OF MY EYES. AND THIS GUY WAS LOOKING AT ME FUNNY. AND MY EYELINER WAS COMING OFF AND I WAS LIKE AHAHAH FUCK.
but okay. this was so beautiful. like. holy shit. i. i. i. /deep breathing
i'm gonna do this comment properly because i can and lol uni pft /waves dismissively. time to start from the top:
Whenever Baekhyun buys Jongdae food, he's really just buying himself food, because Baekhyun ends up eating half of whatever Jongdae orders.
baekhyun is me. i steal my friends' food no matter what. i still get slapped from that one fish katsu i stole 3 months ago /rubs arm sadly
Jongdae knows Baekhyun means well, but Jongdae means even better. He just wants to make sure everyone's okay, even if he's not. oh my god. i just want to wrap a blanket around him and hug him and tell him it's alright to be less strong once in a while
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PAAART TWOOOOOOOOOOOOO OUT OF LEGIT TWELVE. KIDDING. i'll post the rest on tumblr.
“Hi,” Jongin greets. “You know my brother?” Jongin is smiling, and Jongdae already feels uneasy at that look on his face. Jongin is more conniving than he seems, a trait Jongdae is both scared and proud of.
your'e a good kid, jongin. HAHAHAHA.
“Ouch, I’m hurt.” Junmyeon mocks injury, placing his hand on his chest. “Here I thought you came for me.”
Jongdae snorts, rolling his eyes as he replies, “Don’t flatter yourself,” but his smile gives him away.
“You almost had me fooled; I thought you cared about me,” Junmyeon continues, looking away in such a dramatic manner that it has Jongdae chuckling.
playful banter is the best. it makes me so happy
“Oh, I see how it is. Leaving your brother alone while you flir-”
“Well, look at the time!” Jongdae interrupts, shooting daggers at Baekhyun as he proceeds to move away from the counter and an amused Junmyeon. “I only paid for an hour, so we should get going.”baekhyun is legit the bestest friend ever. i
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your comments > my writing hands down man [cries] amy you are seriously too good for me idek man idek i already told you on tumblr how much your comment blew me away bUT SERIOUSLY YOU CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO UNDERSTAND MY LOVE FOR YOU RN LIKE WOW THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU'RE JUST TOO GREAT ♥ ♥
I JUST FINISHED THIS MONSTER AND O M G. the tears I shed for jongdae. This fic is so perf ahhhhhh suchen is so perf for each other you dont even understand how much I ship them right now. AND BFF BAEKCHEN. SOBS it's so beautiful. Ugly sobs at the part where jongdae thinks he is not worthy. YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL AND ALWAYS WORTH KIM JONGDAE. I really really love the ending. It was so sweet and fluffy. I DONT THINK I HAVE EVER SHIPPED SUCHEN AS MUCH AS I HAVE NOW. ODG. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME.
monster indeed cries 19.5k how even idk thank you so much for reading :D yes join the suchen ship it is beautiful and its fics are even more beautiful sometimes sobs mine barely scratched the surface tbh thank you again ♥ ♥
Have you read That Summer Magic by curledupkitten? :D OMG IT'S MY ALL TIME FAVE SUCHEN FIC one of my fave fics period tbh :') I heard Succession of Kings by canttakeabreath is really good too, but I never got around eating it and now it's privated ;A; There were a lot of good fics at the comm criticalcapture too ^^
JONGDAE JONGDAE YOU ARE PRECIOUS. I love BAEKCHEN THEY GIVE ME LIFE. JONGIN IS THE BEST LITTLE BROTHER EVER. JOONMYUN IS PERFECT PERFECT FOR JONGDAE. CAN YOU FEEL MY EXCITEMENT!!!!!!!
GOd idk how or why but this fic just hit home likr anything (not that i have a boyfriend or any romantic relationship problems). Maybe because in a more geberal sense, begnd all the pain and humor, some truth is hidden there. Someone is living Jongdae's life..... who needs a Baekhyun for a shoulder and a Junmyeon to forget the past and look forward to the bright welcoming future
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i'm really glad you connected with jongdae in this fic ah i was hoping he could represent a little of all of us - insecure and unsure of where to go from where he's standing. i hope your best friend gets better soon ;; i know it's hard to handle these feelings, and even worse when it's a friend who's struggling, but i wish you all the best :) thank you so much for reading and your great comment ♥ ♥
To get this out of the way, I think I've spotted a little mistake... Jongdae has his candy in one hand and Jongdae in the other, thinking life can’t get better than this. lol is it a mistake? I think it might be junmyun instead of jongdae.
Anywwaaayyss... Ugh the parts with jongin, when jongdae spoke to him, and then when they went to their parents. I actually started crying, pretty sure I pulled the cant-control-my-feels face that junmyun does haha I love as well the baekchen. That was wonderful, to have a friend like Baekhyun. Gimme someone like him as a BFF please XD I can really relate to jongdae, especially when he puts everyone's needs before his and- hfyregstsgc anyways yeah. Can't give you a better comment TTATT WHY but yeah... It's nice to read suchens this long and this beautiful. Oh and I loved how jongdaes character was explored rather well. tbh this felt short to me HAHA
the only thing lacking in this fic is some tao action LOOOOL I started cackling like a witch when baek's boyfriend was tao and when he didnt do much *
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but okay. this was so beautiful. like. holy shit. i. i. i. /deep breathing
i'm gonna do this comment properly because i can and lol uni pft /waves dismissively. time to start from the top:
Whenever Baekhyun buys Jongdae food, he's really just buying himself food, because Baekhyun ends up eating half of whatever Jongdae orders.
baekhyun is me. i steal my friends' food no matter what. i still get slapped from that one fish katsu i stole 3 months ago /rubs arm sadly
Jongdae knows Baekhyun means well, but Jongdae means even better. He just wants to make sure everyone's okay, even if he's not. oh my god. i just want to wrap a blanket around him and hug him and tell him it's alright to be less strong once in a while ( ... )
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“Hi,” Jongin greets. “You know my brother?” Jongin is smiling, and Jongdae already feels uneasy at that look on his face. Jongin is more conniving than he seems, a trait Jongdae is both scared and proud of.
your'e a good kid, jongin. HAHAHAHA.
“Ouch, I’m hurt.” Junmyeon mocks injury, placing his hand on his chest. “Here I thought you came for me.”
Jongdae snorts, rolling his eyes as he replies, “Don’t flatter yourself,” but his smile gives him away.
“You almost had me fooled; I thought you cared about me,” Junmyeon continues, looking away in such a dramatic manner that it has Jongdae chuckling.
playful banter is the best. it makes me so happy
“Oh, I see how it is. Leaving your brother alone while you flir-”
“Well, look at the time!” Jongdae interrupts, shooting daggers at Baekhyun as he proceeds to move away from the counter and an amused Junmyeon. “I only paid for an hour, so we should get going.”baekhyun is legit the bestest friend ever. i ( ... )
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[cries] amy you are seriously too good for me idek man idek
i already told you on tumblr how much your comment blew me away bUT SERIOUSLY YOU CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO UNDERSTAND MY LOVE FOR YOU RN LIKE WOW THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU'RE JUST TOO GREAT ♥ ♥
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AND BFF BAEKCHEN. SOBS it's so beautiful.
Ugly sobs at the part where jongdae thinks he is not worthy. YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL AND ALWAYS WORTH KIM JONGDAE. I really really love the ending. It was so sweet and fluffy. I DONT THINK I HAVE EVER SHIPPED SUCHEN AS MUCH AS I HAVE NOW. ODG. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME.
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thank you so much for reading :D yes join the suchen ship it is beautiful and its fics are even more beautiful sometimes sobs mine barely scratched the surface tbh
thank you again ♥ ♥
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I love BAEKCHEN THEY GIVE ME LIFE.
JONGIN IS THE BEST LITTLE BROTHER EVER.
JOONMYUN IS PERFECT PERFECT FOR JONGDAE.
CAN YOU FEEL MY EXCITEMENT!!!!!!!
//runs around in feels//
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thank you for reading!! ♥ ♥
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i hope your best friend gets better soon ;; i know it's hard to handle these feelings, and even worse when it's a friend who's struggling, but i wish you all the best :)
thank you so much for reading and your great comment ♥ ♥
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Anywwaaayyss... Ugh the parts with jongin, when jongdae spoke to him, and then when they went to their parents. I actually started crying, pretty sure I pulled the cant-control-my-feels face that junmyun does haha
I love as well the baekchen. That was wonderful, to have a friend like Baekhyun. Gimme someone like him as a BFF please XD
I can really relate to jongdae, especially when he puts everyone's needs before his and- hfyregstsgc anyways yeah. Can't give you a better comment TTATT WHY but yeah... It's nice to read suchens this long and this beautiful.
Oh and I loved how jongdaes character was explored rather well. tbh this felt short to me HAHA
the only thing lacking in this fic is some tao action LOOOOL I started cackling like a witch when baek's boyfriend was tao and when he didnt do much * ( ... )
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lol i'm so sorry the tao action was lacking sobs the baektao was supposed to be rlly subtle because i wanted the entire focus to be on the jundae T_T
thank you so so much for reading!! ♥ ♥
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