my piece for writing group this saturday

[thisjune]

my eyes aren't open yet, and i'm saying these things to myself, the things i'm always saying to myself

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[inthealong]

because old habits don't die, they just go dormant, and i say these things to myself, the things i'm always saying to myself, to lullaby them down.

that is wonderful. resonates, yes.

[amplelight]

ah!!!!! it's like 100 times better than when you first sent it to me, and i printed it out, to give advice from the train. . . . :)

really, i love it lots.

one critique -- end of first paragraph, balance seems like the wrong word because it was just used. if you don't want to hear that, delete this comment, okay? i understand if you don't want it out there.

[thisjune]

no, it's a good point. i put it out there as something i was bringing to writing group for critiques, so yay! thanks for that and thanks for your text, it made me super happy. xoxoxxo.

see you in a WEEK!

[thisjune]

okay... i googled "LTD" and came up with nothing-- i think it just really fits there so it seems familiar. :)

& i changed the first occurance of balance. ((lurve))