hear the whole world turning

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title. hear the whole world turning
rating. R
pairing. (pre-) Sam/Dean
notes. For batoutofkansas. 1950 words, with most grateful thanks to belovedsnail.
summary. Sam's cursed. Dean doesn't really mind.

Comments

[rei_c]

Dean rolled his eyes and looked up at the ceiling beseechingly. "Not again."

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"Oh god," Sam said.

Hee! Perfect, absolutely perfect.

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♥! I'm pleased that you like it. :DDD

[koyote19]

The motel sheets were fluffy, white, sunshine streaming in, bird chirping, picket fence-

-it was pretty fucking annoying is what it was. Sam groaned, stuck his head under the nearest pillow and tried to drown out the sound of morning: traffic, car alarms, coffee pots, alarm clocks, Dean in the shower jerking off, the tv next door, everything.

You had me hooked and laughing with the very first lines. Nice. I think if I were Dean, I would have learned to just go with the flow as well.

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\o/!!

Awesome, thank you so much! And I'm glad that those first lines worked for you - I had the image in my head for a while and I was glad to get it down. :D

[lostt1]

This was great. I love the flow and dialogue and just everything. :)

[moveablehistory]

Thank you kindly!

[innie_darling]

Mmmmmmmmm.

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Thanks!

[astolat]

yum, so hot, and that last trash-talking conversation is just awesome, heee.

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Thanks. :)) That trash-talking bit of dialogue is definitely my favourite in this piece. :)