hear the whole world turning

[moveablehistory]

title. hear the whole world turning
rating. R
pairing. (pre-) Sam/Dean
notes. For batoutofkansas. 1950 words, with most grateful thanks to belovedsnail.
summary. Sam's cursed. Dean doesn't really mind.

Comments

[belovedsnail]

i need to learn to read for typos better, don't i? :))

also, i like the title a lot. it's all sweeping and rhythmically nice.

and somehow i forgot to tell you how much i like the ending section (see also: the beginning two paragraphs, which had such a perfect grumpy-morning tone), which is another one of those fantastic endings you write where i just want to lean back and sigh and sit around with my eyes closed for a while. ♥

and now it's time to turn on the tv for the pilot of Drive, which i don't think will necessarily hold my interest for very long, but Nathan Fillion! and Melanie Lynskey, who completely slew me in Heavenly Creatures! so i figure it's worth a try, at least.

[moveablehistory]

Heee. ♥!

And the title is blatantly from the prompt, heh, but you're right. :)) And endings! Which I am so glad that you like! I think that there is more of this story, and it will likely be winging its way to you maybe after bigbang.

ps., - Drive is awesome car love. :D

[somersaulter]

Ooh, I love it. It just pulls me in and tugs me gently along. Very sweet and lovely piece. =)

[moveablehistory]

I'm so glad that the pacing worked. :D Thank you!

[hansbekhart]

"Sam," Dean said, and that's all he said for a long, long time.

Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous, not a word wasted.

[moveablehistory]

Thank you kindly! ♥!

[poisontaster]

I keep trying to pick bits out of the whole to point out what I like and I really can't. I like it as a whole, a story, a progression of events that feels both inevitable and natural.

[moveablehistory]

Thank you - I'm so pleased that the way it unfolded worked, and that it feels so cohesive. Thanks. :))

[lynnmonster]

I loved this a whole lot.

[moveablehistory]

Thank you!