whirl

[moveablehistory]

Just a little something I've whipped up for belovedsnail and cocombat. Hope you guys enjoy. :)

title: whirl
author: moveablehistory
pairing: sam/dean.
rating: s for schmoop + c for competition, 14a for short.
notes: 780 words, written very quickly. :)
summary: Sam and Dean come across a carnival.

Comments

[kissedbythegods]

Everything sped by so fast and he didn't have to worry about a damned thing.

This was gorgeous. I love that the end was the beginning, and that everything was just so vibrant.

[moveablehistory]

Eee. :) I haven't tried something with a funky timeline in a while, and I used to do it all the time - ergo, kind of nervous but yay. :D

Thanks. ♥ I was aiming for vibrant, and I'm glad that came across. :)

[janissa11]

Oh, sweet as cotton candy itself, and so tasty. Lovely!!!

[moveablehistory]

Thank you. ♥

[lunarwolfik]

I didn't know I needed this until I read it and then I thought, how could I have survived this long without reading about Sam and Dean at the carnival. It's sweet and fluffy and surprisingly hot and I love it.

Sam pushed the pizza box over. "Double dare you."

"Fine!" Dean grinned. He picked up two slices, squished them together and took a huge bite.

Sam made an eww! face.

Dean shrugged, said "whaa?" around a mouthful.

Best scene EVER. Although Sam licking cotton candy off Dean is a close second. Actually, scratch that, I think it's a tie.

I really liked the timeline tango cause I didn't actually realize it was going on until Sam asked Dean if he wanted pizza and then I had one of those lightbulb moments. Lightbulb moments are fun.

[moveablehistory]

Whoa, thanks. :D

I tried to make it porny, but they wouldn't cooperate AND my mom was hovering. :/ - so I'm glad it still came across as kind of hot. :D!

Also, licking cotton candy off Dean? Mmmmmmm!

And I'm glad the timeline worked okay. :) I used to write a lot of wonky timelines - weird contexts, etc - but I hadn't tried it in a while, so I was nervous. Glad it worked. ;D

thanks♥

[cocombat]

Eeeeeee!

See this? This is me filled with *glee*!

This - yes! Just how I picture them, and oh, thank you so much for writing this for me.

I liked Dean's smack-talking with the pizza eating, and the why of their 'time off'. And they're really sweet.

*squeezes extra enjoyment in around the glee!*
;)

[moveablehistory]

After I posted it, I was all oh noes i forgot the hot dogs! so just imagine there's a scene where Sam's eating one and Dean's leering, okay? :D

And thanks so much. :D I tried to come with a reasonable reason why Dean and Sam would stay in one place and/or even notice there was a carnival, without hurting Dean too much. :)

thank you!!! ♥

[exsequar]

Two of my all time favorite things are, 1) the boys in a stable, accepted, casually affectionate relationship, and 2) the boys doing something fun and not related to hunting. So this was like EEEEEEHAPPY for me. They're so sweet and comfortable with each other, I LOVE it! Plus, snarky! And silly! Adorable piece :D

[moveablehistory]

Dude, those are a couple of my favourite things too. :D

So happy you like it. And yay for snarky and silly! ♥

[exsequar]

PS: This icon is what I pictured when Sam did his eww face. How adorable!! *smishes him*

[moveablehistory]

Hehehe, eww!face. :)