whirl

[moveablehistory]

Just a little something I've whipped up for belovedsnail and cocombat. Hope you guys enjoy. :)

title: whirl
author: moveablehistory
pairing: sam/dean.
rating: s for schmoop + c for competition, 14a for short.
notes: 780 words, written very quickly. :)
summary: Sam and Dean come across a carnival.

Comments

[moveablehistory]

The carousel was my favourite too, and I hadn't noticed that I wrote them finding-not-buying tickets but of course that makes sense. :)

Thanks. ♥

[crimsonsenya]

So much fun and mirth! You managed to convey such a colourful atmosphere in a quite short space. It took me a while to get the catch of the fic but that's because I'm a bit dense. :D What an enjoyable read!

[moveablehistory]

Haha, thanks! I like trying to pack a whole lot into a low word count, and I'm so happy it came across that way.

thanks ever so much. ♥

[bluesister]

Delightful!

[moveablehistory]

Thanks! ♥

[tsuki_no_bara]

dean covered in bits of cotton candy is possibly my favorite image. SO CUTE. he's really five, he just LOOKS like an adult. :D the whole thing is really sweet, tho, fun and brotherly and they can't spend all their time hunting and killing.... and i like how subtle dean's cast is, and the whole reason for them to be taking some r&r in the first place.

[moveablehistory]

I know! *dead from cute*

And thanks. :D I figure that they've got to hurt themselves sometimes - this whole magical-winchester-healing-properties thing is kind of bizarre. :)

thanks so much. ♥

[firesdew]

so adorable!!! loved the cotton candy scene, just made me go eeeeee!
lovely writing, as always. :)

[moveablehistory]

you're so cute, kid. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥