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laughter, defiant.

Nov 18, 2006 01:26

title: laughter, defiant.
rating: 14a
pairing: Sam/Dean
notes: for veronamay, happy birthday! here's 2300ish words of lighthearted Sam/Dean. Unbeta'd. :)

( hefted a 30lb bag of road salt into the cart )

genre: crack, length: 2000-3000, rating: r, pairing: sam/dean, fandom: supernatural, genre: schmoop, genre: comedy

Comments 30

veronamay November 18 2006, 06:48:41 UTC

Warning: Feedback contains much capslock abuse.

9. Issue #1 (Sam was very excited) of The Astonishing X-Men- check.

GEEKLOVE.

"Sign here, Mr. Plant."

ROCKLOVE.

"Put on a good show now, sweetheart."

GLEE.

"So what now, genius?" They ducked down into the lowest rung of a industrial shelf, and Sam was frowning because he'd hit his head and it stung.

"Wait unil the store closes, then sneak out. Obviously, Sam- hey! We can do that 50 Things To Do In Wal-Mart!"

"We're not in a Wal-Mart, Dean, this is a-"

"-shh!"

They shrunk back as far into shadows as they could while forklift passed them, carrying what appeared to be a hell of a lot of cases of Spam.

I have always, always wanted to incorporate that into a story somehow. You WIN.

"Left left or the other left?"

"Other left, our right."

"Just making sure, Sam."

BROTHERSNARKLOVE.

"I could go to the home decor section and find a big mirror to nail to the ceiling."This? This made me cackle with glee. Because you KNOW Dean watched reruns of Starsky & Hutch while he was ( ... )

moveablehistory November 19 2006, 02:45:00 UTC

YAY YAY YAY!

I'm so glad you like it - I admit that I went through it after you commented and I couldn't believe all the typos I found, oh gosh. *facepalm*

In any case - yay. ♥ :D

veronamay November 19 2006, 06:40:09 UTC

Typos, schmypos. It was great! Thank you!

marishna November 18 2006, 11:19:10 UTC

Hee! Loved this so much!

moveablehistory November 19 2006, 02:45:14 UTC

Wheee, thank you kindly!!

dev_earl November 18 2006, 12:36:57 UTC

God. I wish I live in your brain. :D

moveablehistory November 19 2006, 02:46:01 UTC

Hahaha, I think it'd be a very confusing place. ♥

rei_c November 18 2006, 15:37:13 UTC

"Marked, anyways. Don't want it." Dean bumped back, hipcheck over a step.

"Robert Plant was my favourite."

"Mine too."

So much love for this piece.

moveablehistory November 19 2006, 02:47:03 UTC

Thank you so very much, oh ♥. ;)

reikah November 18 2006, 21:00:38 UTC

Oh, this was fantastic! So sweet and soft and schmoopy! I kind of wantr to run away with this story, um.

moveablehistory November 19 2006, 02:48:15 UTC

I'm so glad you haven't gotten tired of all the schmoop I post, haha. :)

thank you!! ♥