I Love You, I Love You, I Love you (JunMa) Part Two

Jul 10, 2011 03:06

Part One“Oops.” Jun says as he notices that the restaurant he’d picked for dinner was closed, he looked at the timings of the restaurant plastered on the door ( Read more... )

l: oneshot, p: junma

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semzova July 9 2011, 22:01:11 UTC
Thank you so much. I Liked it.

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nande_daiyo July 10 2011, 04:38:06 UTC
Thanks for reading it :D

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bokunosubete July 9 2011, 23:45:34 UTC
<33333333333333

I love everything about this.
And I love how this was in my inbox right when I woke up.

XD

RL had been sucha bitch. I missed reading your JunMa, Nani T_T

And really,you're not the only JunMa writer out there,
yours are the only I really enjoy.

<3

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bokunosubete July 9 2011, 23:48:05 UTC
I left a "but" in the last sentence pffft
I hate mobile browser -_-"

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nande_daiyo July 10 2011, 04:35:20 UTC
<3 I've never had "Error: The post is too large" before. It's almost addictive but writing 16K is hard and I've had to tear out a few hairs because I just don't know how some people churn out stuff this length because damn is it time consuming and its SUMMER and I'm still complaining about how much time it consumes :P

Sorry for losing touch with Arashi :(
I can't really write good gleefic...heck. I can't write good fic but without all my friends still supporting me gleefics just seem so much more infinitively worse! XD

And aww **punches RL**

WHAT YOU LIEEEEEEEEEE. Where are all these secret JunMa writers existing without my knowledge? Well I know there is a JunMa diary going on which is f-locked drabbles though but its still AWESOME XD

But I'm still kind of d'awww-ing at what you said.

D'aawwww Syu <3

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camaronzin July 10 2011, 04:36:42 UTC
well obviously the Junma writers aren't mainstream XD

Well maybe just Bame ¬¬

LOL

It was great! Some facts are wrong but it was great! <3333

I need more Junma<333

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nande_daiyo July 10 2011, 04:45:41 UTC
How can FACTS BE WRONG.

Okay so maybe I did invent most of it and didn't really care about what came first.

BAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA

...Sorry? XD

The length still makes it epic! (It always was the only thing that did XD)

Yeah I wanted to write other than Bame in the note but she doesn't write other than the diary anymore and...HAVE YOU POSTED SOMETHING WITHOUT MY KNOWLEDGE?

Ougads. I've been out of touch :(

I need more inspiration and more of these non-mainstream writers to come out to me. *stares*

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boblemon July 10 2011, 11:14:16 UTC
That was really long yeah. =A= But so good thank you for making it a happy ending.

About the timeline... it doesn't matter that it wasn't chronological. Because you revealed certain things at certain times and it worked well. I have to admit I couldn't really put them in order after I was finished, but that doesn't matter, right? >_>; Although the first scene made me think the whole thing was going to continue to be depressing. You really know how to pull at my heart strings don't you?

But it was good! I like the tension between them, not sure what they were feeling or what the other was feeling or what they should do about it or what actions to take when it was over.

Anyway, just thank you~

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nande_daiyo July 10 2011, 12:53:09 UTC
Booooooob!!! <3

So long. I wasn't sure how to start talking to you again cause I don't read Arashi fics atm and well um haven't even checked my f-page but you WON a Shoneen competition and congratulations! You're ShoNino's are the best (and only ones I'd read)

And ugh! THANK YOU! You don't know how much of a relief that was because (now arrives long rambling insecurity) I was completely at wit's end with this. I started a long time ago, listing scenes out. Some facts, some altered facts, mostsome pure imagination and it took so long to write and I lost coherency, drawing inspiration from different places and okay so in the end JunMa just turned into my life minus the happy ending. It's so hard to get to a significant point in relationships you know? and I felt like throwing bricks at how easily Jun just came out and said it. (that tension you just described summarizes my non existent love life ( ... )

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boblemon July 10 2011, 13:07:11 UTC
You can talk to me anytime!! :DD But I know the feeling, seriously... not only caught up on wanting to write, but I've been honestly trying to participate in the fanfiction awards at sakumoto_sm but it takes so much time. T__T I can barely keep up, and I have a whole other list of things I want to read, plus still going to work and now that summer's coming up I'm going to travel...! No time! D:

Haha, actually I've thought about writing a story that was based off my love life, but I think it would be too angsty. And maybe hit too close to home if you know what I mean. But in this, I think that Jun came out and said it quickly was good, like a dam broke and he had to or else he would break, that sort of feeling. And if he didn't then he would probably never say it. >_< Plus, so cute that he had to practice that explanation before hand ( ... )

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nande_daiyo July 10 2011, 13:47:35 UTC
I read often now but Glee fanfiction and not Arashi and I try to write but breaking into a new fandom after you've been in one for two years is kind of terrifying XD

Not to mention RL is getting busier (I've had so many roadtrips this summer -_-)

RL is too much angst. I just had to draw stuff from it cause I was like wtf am I supposed to do with these NAO? XD

I was always too afraid that Jun was too abrupt. But god forbid that happens, stuff just bursting out (that's me last summer) except usually Toma's aren't as expressive. No words...

THe grass is always greener on the other side. My writing is always so all over the place. :(
I'd kill to be able to keep structure or write smut (how is it I can STILL NOT write any?)

<3

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alexxasick July 10 2011, 21:43:20 UTC
ahhh thanks thanks thanks!!!! :DD

I love it every one of the 16k words :P

I'm sorry I couldn't read before -_- I've been trying to read since yesterday but there was my brother's graduation and my grandma's birthday and I just couldn't :(

:D I love it and thanks again <3

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nande_daiyo July 11 2011, 04:40:01 UTC
Yeah I knew you wouldn't be able to read it because of your brother's grad but you didn't tell me about your grandma

Feliz cumpleanos, Abuela!

Trust me that is something i learnt from Dora, The Explorer and not my Spanish class XD

Ah me and my 16K obsession XD Well it was really big for me to finish. I started a superhero AU (Klaine and Kurtofsky) and I need a beta! Sickieeeeeeeeeee! :D :D

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