Still Life

Nov 09, 2009 20:30

Title: Still Life
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook, Yesung/Kyuhyun (friendship)
Rating: R
Word count: 4,591
Summary: Jongwoon fell in love with Ryeowook in high school, and never fell out of it even after Ryeowook exited his life. So he finds the next best thing to replace him, but it sends him into a downward spiral of insanity.

A/N: Written for miracle______'s 2009 Read more... )

!fanfiction, !contest, pairing: yesung/ryeowook

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ficcy November 9 2009, 13:49:20 UTC
Creepy and absolutely terrifying. At the same time, heartbreaking, because I really feel sorry for Yehsung in this one. I really hoped that you'd let him meet the real Ryeowook but he never did.

Still, I love it. <3 Congratulations, BB. :D

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thundersquall November 9 2009, 14:18:16 UTC
You're too sweet bb *hugclings* Thank you for your comment both here, and at the original post, it totally made my day. I'm so happy that you think this is creepy! ♥

;___; I need to go back to writing happy YeWook, this one and the one before (that incest fic) were both so angsty.

I LOVE YOU, THANK YOU ♥

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fishydotlove November 9 2009, 13:57:08 UTC
i commented there, and comment here again:D
really want you to know that i love this fic<33 reread this again and O.o
srsly, the idea of yesung being such a maniac like that, so T^T
poorpoor yesungie, i kinda wished he'd end up with ryeowook X"(

and i like the kyuhyunxyesung relationship, kyu's being such a good friend^^
<3this is very well written and heartbreakingly gorgeous<3

oh! and congratz on being 3rd winner \^0^/ (sorry for the lame comment><)

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thundersquall November 9 2009, 14:20:38 UTC
Ooooh I saw your comment there, thank you so much for it, and for this one too!

It makes me really glad to know that you liked this so much, even though I was kind of hard on poor Yesung in here. I would have LOVED to write a happy ending (I like happy endings for YeWook =P ) but since this was meant to be for Halloween I decided to keep it dark and creepy. xD

I really like YeKyu too, I wish there was more of it around!

Thank you very very much, really, and omg your comments aren't lame, they make me so happy! <33333

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komoyochan November 9 2009, 18:12:50 UTC
Oh dear Lord DD:!!

That was so good! I felt so bad for Jongwoon but then I started to feel just as bad for Kyuhyun! I do kind of wonder what Kyuhyun's feelings towards Jongwoon is, like, did he really friend him out of pity or did he actually like him?

But it was such a nice story and creepy and just amazing <3 Yekyu is kinda cute too : ) Awesome joooobs! =DDD <333

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thundersquall November 10 2009, 02:01:06 UTC
Oh, I think in the beginning Kyu became friends with him out of pity, but he became genuinely fond of him over time. But he still pities Jongwoon for being such a recluse and having no social life, and he also knows he's Jongwoon's only friend, which is why he makes the effort to take Jongwoon out and all that. =D

Thank you, I'm glad you liked this! <3333

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aishiteru_95 November 9 2009, 19:40:14 UTC
I'm creeped out. And terrified. ;_;

YOU UPDATEDDD. I've been checking your journal almost everyday to see if you've uploaded a new fic! //is a stalker// XP

Loved it though. ♥

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thundersquall November 10 2009, 02:03:09 UTC
I'm sorry I didn't update for so long! D: Actually I have been writing, but my last couple of fics are meant for contests, so I can't post them until the contests are over. D:

But thank you so much for reading and following my stuff, that makes me reeeeeally happy. Thank you so much! <33333

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mayshy November 10 2009, 00:58:11 UTC
wow....i am speechless.......
this was one weird ass story, but i liked it. i feel so bad for yesung though..and
i still don't really get kyu..was it really out of pity? and if it was, y did he keep coming
back to him? i'm so confused, but w/e it was well written =]

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thundersquall November 10 2009, 02:04:59 UTC
Oh, Kyu does pity Jongwoon because he knows Jongwoon has no friends or social life. But he also likes him (as a friend though), which is why he tries to help Jongwoon by bringing him out and trying to introduce girls to him. =D Sorry if it seemed confusing! I hope this clears it up somewhat.

Thank you for reading this! 8DDDD

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mayshy November 11 2009, 00:53:54 UTC
Oh I see =] and thank YOU for writing this lol
i still can't forget this story, it was just so aweseom =]

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