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thundersquall

Still Life

Nov 09, 2009 20:30

Title: Still Life
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook, Yesung/Kyuhyun (friendship)
Rating: R
Word count: 4,591
Summary: Jongwoon fell in love with Ryeowook in high school, and never fell out of it even after Ryeowook exited his life. So he finds the next best thing to replace him, but it sends him into a downward spiral of insanity.

A/N: Written for miracle______'s 2009 ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, !contest, pairing: yesung/ryeowook

Comments 60

g_041 November 15 2009, 16:31:01 UTC

Hauntingly beautiful is the words I'll use to describe this masterpiece of yours! ^^
Love the way you described Yesung's transition from being just a person who admired and loved Ryeowook to the one who's so obsessed over him!
Creepy in a way, yet so perfect in another.
(Hope the REAL Ryeowook ends up with him! DX)

thundersquall November 15 2009, 23:38:40 UTC

Oh gosh, this is such a nice comment. Thank you very very much! I tried to be very careful over the transition, I didn't want it to be too fast. Thanks again for reading and liking this! =D

darleenk December 5 2009, 19:33:18 UTC

AHHH, SCREAMS AT YOU, WHY ARE YOU ALWAYS SO INSECURE WHEN IT COMES TO ME + YOUR FIC, YOU KNOW IT ALWAYS = LOVE.

THAT WAS SO CREEPY, YOU DID THAT SOOOO WELL. OOOOH, SHUDDERING IRL, IDEK. YOU ARE SO CLEVER.

thundersquall December 6 2009, 05:34:23 UTC

BECAUSE YOU HAVE CRAZY HIGH STANDARDS LIKE I DON'T EVEN KNOW. =/

I'M GLAD YOU THOUGHT IT WAS CREEPY, MY MISSION IS ACCOMPLISHED. I LOVE YOU ENAID *CLINGS* ♥

lightsnower December 26 2009, 08:22:52 UTC

Oh my word. Holy fricken crap.
That was amazing. God, it was so terrifying and somewhat really good, it made me feel sorta lonely, like the way Yesung was, and Kyu... Ahh, please, write more fics like this! Maybe a sequel? I'm in love with this story...
So creepy and good...
I LOVE IT!
I want a Yesung Dollie ^^

thundersquall December 26 2009, 12:11:23 UTC

ROFL, no, I can't do a sequel for this! This fic alone drained me. =P But thank you so much! I'm actually glad you found it creepy, because that means I managed to get the creep factor across. So thank you for reading, and liking this! ;DDD

lightsnower December 27 2009, 07:59:59 UTC

Haha, no problemo x3
oh, and, I'm a huge supporter of this story :D

animemonkey84 January 29 2010, 04:57:00 UTC

Oh gosh, this story broke my heart, I literally started crying T_T

It was so beautiful and sad and omg I'm now addicted to your stories

please forgive me for stalking your account now o.o

thundersquall January 29 2010, 09:40:19 UTC

Omg, I'm sorry. D: Don't cry! *gives tissues*

But awww, I am so glad you liked this. Addiction and stalking is very welcome! =P Thank you so much! <33333

heijihatsutori March 4 2010, 06:05:50 UTC

Oh. God.

Why, oh why do I read this? I'm tearing up now, and it doesn't help that there are MANY people around.

It's creepy, when Jongwoon sees the doll smile, knowing it's a freaking doll, but couldn't help himself, because he loves him so. It's frigtening, how the doll seems damn alive, but not so. It's heartbreaking when he goes crazy, and I can feel for Kyuhyun in this. It's...damn, I can't believe I can come up with all this comment!

This is worth the prize, and even if it doesn't, it already wins me over.

heijihatsutori March 4 2010, 06:09:05 UTC

BTW, listening to Nightwish's Meadows of Heaven while reading this gives the impact (to me, at least) twice the blow.

Damn, I should stop now.

Thanks for sharing.

thundersquall March 4 2010, 09:26:02 UTC

NOOOOOO why are you crying? ;____; *wipes tears*

But ROFL, it's so terrible that you're reading fic with people around, if they peeked over your shoulder it'd be weird. xD

And thank you so much for saying this is worth the prize, I really appreciate that. ;____; I've not heard that song before but I'm listening to it now and omg, I'm getting the chills. I see what you mean. :3

Thank you for reading and commenting! You are always so awesome. <33333

heijihatsutori March 30 2010, 07:47:56 UTC

Idek~ *takes the tissue*

Ikr! But this is like the only place with good internet connection...the line hates my room a tad too much~ T_T

I usually choose the spot where people will not be able to see my laptop from behind, like leaning on the wall or something...so far nobody had caught me~ XD

Really, this really worth it! I've been randomly reading fics around and have to say this piece still stuck around in my head. It helps I love angst to death too...LOL.

Indeed, there's something haunting about the song...it gives me chills until the last sentence~

No, thanks YOU for sharing this piece! You're made of pure awesomeness~ <3333

P/S: Sorry for the super-duper late reply~ T_T

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