Upon Request

[thursdaynite]

Upon Request I am posting my memoir from my COM class because SOMEONE asked to see a sample of my work. However I had to follow some strict guidelines for certain things so...As I write My 7 page paper you all can enjoy ..or not enjoy

Comments

just so y'all know, i'm "someone".

[anonymous]

lol.

but wow.

you're amazing.

that was realllllly good. not gassing you up at all.

you painted such a clear and vivid picture. how the hell do you remember all this from 7? i can't even remember anything but the "silverhawks" sweater w/ stars sown in on it by my mother.

and you've got e'rry detail enscribed. heartwrenching as they may be.

it's funny how self important you were at that age. haha..."we're doing something mature".

the end is so sad. so very sad. finding out that our intentions may not always be clear to e'rry one else and it's harder to save the world than we once thought is something that hurts. i still am trying to save the world.

so you always been this smart and sophisticated? lol.

i'm truely impressed. and thank you for sharing this w/ us / me. this was dope. and you should throw up more when you get a chance.

*muah*.
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[kiwikutie]

yayne that was absolutely amazing!! whoa...im completely blown away. please PLEASE post more when you get a chance. <3<3

it explains a lot actually!

[khonaye]

Remember when we used to sit on the bench and analyse people for ages. At least now i know that it's in you...the need to help, the excruciating impulse to see where ends meet. In this case, where people stop hurting each other and learning to understand, just as you have always wanted to understand and to be understood. The question is, what influenced this story? Are the echoes that persist, and you have been unable to ignore them?