Comments | thylaslain: [FIC] Push and Pull

thylaslain

[FIC] Push and Pull - OneShot

Jul 03, 2005 01:39

Push and Pull
Overall rating: R

Summary: It's like all those lies and truths are lying in bed with you...

SPOILERS: None
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related characters (c) Masashi Kishimoto -- i.e. They are not mine.

( Perhaps it's one lie after another. )

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Comments 15

catalase217 July 3 2005, 09:33:58 UTC

Beautiful, I shall say...I like the overall tone and mood blended with this fic, which well reflects the complicated nature of bond between Naruto and Sasuke...It's like, something is definitely there, but one just cannot easily figure out...Good job!

sugercat July 3 2005, 09:38:23 UTC

Wow

mushroom18 July 3 2005, 12:05:25 UTC

your skin and his skin is the only thing that keeps you both separated.

Damn, I'm loving this. I really am.

xiaobai7988 July 3 2005, 14:30:47 UTC

Ahh...a brilliant one. X3 Really describes their relationship well...at least that's what I feel...XD;; :3 Brilliant~

yonde July 3 2005, 17:00:37 UTC

Amazing, as always.

I love how it's written as 'you' and 'he'-it's a clever strategy that drives your points home more than a detatched, emotionless telling. And I love how you mentioned who was who once, in an abstract way-even though that was enough.

<333

(I just wrote a serious review?! wtf?!)

thylaslain July 4 2005, 07:12:40 UTC

first the lineart and then the review. or the review then the lineart. not sure. Jeebus Yonde-chan, what's up with THAT?!

*gives you cookie*