[FIC] You and Me - Chapter VII

[thylaslain]

You and Me
Overall rating: R - NC-17

Summary: Uchiha Sasuke has returned to Konohagakure. He's changed of course. But so has everything else...
Chapter 7/?
SPOILERS: Up to current in Anime (i.e. Episode 135).
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto :: Others may be mentioned
Chapter Rating: PG-12
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related

Comments

[pastel_waltz]

FIRST COMMENT! W00T!

Liked it, but thought the flow of the story was a bit choppy. Maybe you need more in the transitions.

[thylaslain]

:) it was meant to be choppy. thanks for the comment n_n

[thylaslain]

heh. i dunno. can't help you there.

[anonymous]

Study or read....?

Well you can guess which happened. *sigh* Had to re-read the other chapters because it has been a while... ^^; and then I got all sniffly and BAH! More please...? Need more good fics to stave off my stupid addiction to these things.

[thylaslain]

haha. I have a nasty addiction too. Don't worry. You ae not alone.

[jgal87]

wow.... wonderful ficcy ^_^ adores it

[applepiefilling]

Yaaay. Aaaaangst. You have a very real way of decribing things. Little stuff people don't notice unless they look reeeally close. I like it... can't wait to see how you're gonna shove them together n_n and Naruto continues to cough up blood. Um. Not good. D:

[thylaslain]

shoving is good!!! n_n
there will be some definite shoving in this one. especially since our two little bishies just happen to be stubborn idiots in their own special ways...