[FIC] You and Me - Chapter II

[thylaslain]

You and Me

Overall rating: R - NC-17

Summary: Uchiha Sasuke has returned to Konohagakure. He's changed of course. But so has everything else...

SPOILERS: Up to current in Anime (i.e. Episode 135).
Chapter 2/?
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto Others may be mentioned
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related characters (c)

Comments

[ly_mizukage]

damn, so sad!
write more, before I die from curiosity X_X

[thylaslain]

oh, dun worry! dun die either! i'm writing! I'M WRITING! just don't DIE!!

[silverygit]

That was odd....*_* I want to know what will happen with sasuke...this is interesting!!!...maybe he will get into Naruto's world...one day, or not.

[thylaslain]

thanks ya!

[kirikou_yuki]

Meeeeeeeep, when is he gonna go see Naru-chan and make it all better ;_;

(The whole picture thing was a really great idea though, I hope they put it in the anime ^^)

[thylaslain]

oh if they did, i would s freak out.

u know what I'd like to see? More NaruSasu. uh huh. (surprised? *teehee*)
oh. and more nejihina.
i'd die.
die.
DIE OF HAPPINESS

[kirikou_yuki]

Indeed, I prefer SasuNaruSasu though, a bitchy/dominant uke Naruto X3

And YESH NejiHina!!!!!!!

*whispers* in the manga they revealed a HUGE plot thingy though....

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The longer Kyuubi stays within Naruto the more the two fuse together 0_o
Now THERE'S a plot thingy that's overly used in fanfics XP

[thylaslain]

oh my jeebus! MAYBE IF WE WRITE ENOUGH SASUNARU, NEJIHINA, THEY'LL BE SWAYED TO ANIMATE IT!

prolly get all their ideas from fanfics ANYWAY.
hmph.

yes. yes. totally agree with the dominant naruto. stupid sasUKE.
lol. teehee.

YES WE DEFINITELY NEED TO WRITE MORE NEJIHINA!
ok.ok.uhm...
*takes out pen*
Neji watched as Hinata worked in her garden. His cousin's white eyes notseeing him. Or maybe they did.

AH SCREW IT, LET'S GET TO THE POINT, NE?

Neji turned to Hinata, an indescribable emotion etched across his handsome *ahem* i meant INSANELY HOT face.
"Hinata-sama -- Hinata? I love you."
Hinata's heart stopped.
"I LOVE YOU TOO" she squealed
and then they jumped each other.

and did naughty things.

oh hinata. you lucky, lucky girl.

[thexsadist]

Kuuuuso~!!
Why was I not first. nyaaabecauseTracywasgonesince11to3?. Oh well--at least I'm here now :3 Nyaaa-I really never tire of your writing, it makes me feel as if there's some non-existant narrator is just echoing the words in my ear than my eyes just following the words. You did a really splendid job of catching attention in the first few lines, and this has to be one of my favorites--because for some reason it clung onto me: The taste of blood and tears were sour at the back of his throat. I love the description and emotion that you portray back at the manor--it just radiates the idea that Sasuke is probably thinking 'This used to be home...?' And then the whole photograph thing just had me melting. Half pity--half mushy

[thylaslain]

it was short? yeah. it was GOING to be 5 pages long. but then i cut it in half and continued the rest in chapter 3. n_n ah, Tra-sama, your reviews always make me giddy and HAPPY as hell.

ooh ficlet? meaning MORE?!
YESHHHHHHHHH *does the happydance*

if i wasn't writing such a stupidly angsty (teh angst is making my head implode) fic, i swears, i'd be poking SO much fun at Sasuke. and make orochimaru rape him several times over.

eeeeeeeeeeeeewwweeeeeeee.
ok. i don't hate the teme THAT much.
Like I said before (dunno if i've said it to you already), i hate the teme, UNLESS he's with naru-chan. see how naru-chan redeems people? he's just like that. n_n

I thinks Neji and co. are about to save him. can't WAIT for chap 262. but, yeah. I thinks Neji and co. are saving him. although, it might be too late. ::cries::

OH THE ANGUISH!

the pAIN!

[thexsadist]

;__; -cries tears of joooooy-
I'm happy that I make such a sexxxyimpact ;D Nyaaa-it's still good, does this mean we'll have a longer chapter 3?

LOL-oh my poor heart...err...maybe..maybe poor Sasuke. It's going to be a ficlet-yessums :O Angst-loaded with possible smut~! I do hope someone saves him. GOGOPOWERRANGERS! XD Or ...or...you know...Neji and company -sniffs-

[thylaslain]

oh Gosh, i remember the Power Rangers.

used to be addicted.
SO wanted to be the yellow ranger. Trini. yeah.
I still remember the original five.
Billy, Jason (who was mighty cute btw...), Kimberly, Trini and...Zack.
Zack, yeah?
then that tommy dude came. and the whole love fest started.
*memorieeeeeeeeeeeees*

[azamaria_chan]

*cries* this is so sad... *sniff* i really wanna know what's going on with naruto! hopefully sasuke is the cure. :]
i love the fic so far. has great potential! can't wait for the next chapter.
<3

[thylaslain]

:D so far, eh?
lol. tell me when you decide you hateit. lol. so i can stop writing. heehee