I come bearing fic...

Aug 15, 2007 23:01

Title: At Last
Author: tiemeinbows
Rating: PG-13/Teen
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Word Count: 5135 words
Disclaimer: They're all JKR's.
Summary: In the aftermath of the final battle, Ron and Hermione finally manage to slip away, and find a moment for themselves.
Warning: Deathly Hallows spoilers.  Absolutely.
Note: This is unbeta'd and full of tiny canon infractions.  But ( Read more... )

public!post, ron/hermione, my one attempt at hp, fanfic

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anonymous August 17 2007, 18:01:50 UTC
you are ruddy brilliant!!! like absolutely ruddy brilliant!!! your characterization was awesome!! i have mread millions of fanfics, and post DH, perhpas a dozen, but this is the first time i am leaving a review!!! so that explains it dunnit??
carry on writing. its an ORDER =)
ME
p.s-- was it just me, but i thot it was very odd, tht ron and hermiones first kis came so at the end of the book. i though something might have happened at the malfoy manor. i mean COME ON!

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tiemeinbows August 17 2007, 21:50:16 UTC
Thank you! Wow, that's definitely a compliment for you to have left feedback for me at all. :)

And yes, I can't BELIEVE we only got one kiss in the book. Tuh. I mean, I was kind of expecting it, but that was ridiculous.

How does one post a story on Checkmated? I don't even know... o.O

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anonymous August 18 2007, 10:55:45 UTC
Well, you go to checkmated.com, and then you register there as a writer i suppose. and submit your fic. like just visit the site and see. Its a damn good site for fanfictions, accepts mostly good stuff only. So, yeah go there, and people give good constructive reviews too!
ME
p.s-- Do some more writing, you got the talent, and you got the characters bang on. Most of the people don't get much of Hermione usually . =)

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tiemeinbows August 18 2007, 16:52:12 UTC
I figured the checkmated bit out. :) I was already registered as a reviewer there under cardinalgirl... and I did submit... so we'll see how that goes. ;)

Thank you very much for your comment about my writing, and your encouragement. Usually I write for the long-canceled TV show Roswell, but I'm actually trying to get some original stuff written now... and prune my concentration on fanfic... I had never, ever gotten an idea for HP before this, so I don't know when I will again. *shrugs*

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anonymous August 17 2007, 18:07:18 UTC
oh yeah i forgot to mention. post it on checkmated. the poor people over there are dying for a good read. :)
ME

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michelle_ravel August 18 2007, 15:50:20 UTC
Loved it.

*friends*

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tiemeinbows August 18 2007, 16:56:00 UTC
Yay, thank you for reading. :)

*friends back*

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shurryry August 18 2007, 17:56:17 UTC
I totally loved this!x3
I'm pretty dissapointed by most R/Hr fics i've read by now,but this one was truly how a R/Hr fic should be !x33
Do you have a FF.net account?I need to fave this x3

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tiemeinbows August 19 2007, 03:25:07 UTC
Thanks! I don't have an FF.net account, and I don't plan on making one, sorry. But thank you for the compliment, anyhow. :)

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snowe August 22 2007, 03:13:48 UTC
HBP and non-canon ships have killed a lot of my R/Hr love, but you just resurrected it! This was sweet and tender without being nauseating, and it was very IC as well.
Very nice!

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tiemeinbows August 23 2007, 21:56:54 UTC
Oh wow, thanks for saying that, and for reading. :) I'm really glad you liked it.

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