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[tig_alicious]

As requested by Fabi, this is the poem I wrote a couple days ago.  It's new, so I'm still really awkward and hesitant about it, so please tell me if there's any way you think it could be improved.  I'm not sure why, but the idea of real critical reading is less wierd to me than the kind of mandatory give-it-to-your-mother reading.  Anyway, enjoy (

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[mydevinecomedy]

I always enjoy reading your poetry. Hardly any of my other friends posts theirs. In fact, I still have the paper you wrote for me while I was at basic. I read it last week as I was cleaning my room. It always leaves me breathless by the time I finish it. ^.^

[tig_alicious]

Thank you! That's really cool to hear.

[todo_cambia]

I honestly really like this poem. :3 You really tie in the ideas well together and all of these images flooded my mind when I started reading it. :) Keep writing! :D