Swift

[tightshorts]

Title: Swift

Comments

[moonling]

I-I-I'm not sure exactly what they both are or even when the story ends, but omg!brilliance and laughter and all around awesomesauce. This was great. =D

[Edit] Oh. Just got they were amoeba's with a second read through. >< Gets better every read.

[tightshorts]

Thank you. =D I'm really glad you liked it. :3

[tatatsumari]

Hey, really cute fic. I like the dialogue and character interactions very much. One thing I'd suggest is getting a beta reader though. I spotted several grammatical errors (changes in tenses, incorrect use of apostrophes...) but otherwise it's a good fic. :)

[tightshorts]

Thank you.
Sorry about grammatical errors. (Much like making new friends, finding a beta is something I'm a bit too shy to do. I'll do my best to check my stuff more throughly.)
I'm glad you like the story, and thank you for the comment.

[alittlebrighter]

Lol, brilliant concept, made me lol ^^ and is that a request for friends I hear as an undertone? *waggles eyebrows in a come-hither way* ;-P x

[tightshorts]

*attempts to waggle eyebrows back but looks more like she's about to sneeze*
It was. :D I may juts go venture to your journal. :D As in do you mind if I friend you?
Your icon is adorable, and I glad you liked the story.

[archaeologist_d]

Very funny. Loved that they were amoebas. And writing crack fic in school. LOL.

[tightshorts]

I'm glad you liked the idea.
It hit me in Biology and I knew it needed to be written. (h Biology test I still have tomorrow, but have yet to study for...)
Crack fics always originate at school for me. :3

[coro29]

Ah, that was fun to read (if a bit weird at first..but that just made it better)! Plus, the whole amoeba concept was quite.. interesting ;)

I loved the ending as well! Very original -subtle- way of requesting, that oneXD

Oh, and good luck on your test!

[tightshorts]

Thank you sooo much. (I really need luck for that test tomorrow)
I love your icon, and I'm glad you liked the story.