12 December 2016

[tijuanagringo]

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Brushback Pitch  : a converse-action
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Why don’t you slide down a razor blade into a pool of alcohol.
What?
So’s your mama.
Now see here…
You see here.
What?
Yeah, that.
Say what?
You heard me.
Damn. Seems like you want me to shit or get off the pot.
Yeah, man, that’s it. Either you quit bitching or get out of the kitchen.
You the one who’s

Comments

[penpusher]

A very evocative poem! Yeow!

[tijuanagringo]

Thank you! Glad you enjoy my little brushback chat. :-)

[rayaso]

An actual brushback pitch poem! Very creative, and I especially liked your first line.

[tijuanagringo]

Thanks! Very much appreciate your comment. :-)

[baxaphobia]

Creative poetry is always a good thing!

[tijuanagringo]

Thank you! :-)

[lordrexfear]

You and your word play!

[tijuanagringo]

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Yeah, I am playing; you got that right, Mr. R. :-)
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[adoptedwriter]

This was great!

[tijuanagringo]

Thank you !