12 December 2016

Dec 12, 2016 07:35

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Brushback Pitch  : a converse-action
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Why don’t you slide down a razor blade into a pool of alcohol.
What?
So’s your mama.
Now see here…
You see here.
What?
Yeah, that.
Say what?
You heard me.
Damn. Seems like you want me to shit or get off the pot.
Yeah, man, that’s it. Either you quit bitching or get out of the kitchen.
You the one who’s ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus December 15 2016, 21:49:56 UTC
quit bitching or get out of the kitchen.
Never heard this one before!

Hey, it's all talk until it isn't, and then the punches fly.

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tijuanagringo December 16 2016, 00:39:12 UTC
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yep -- you got it right
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the brushback pitch can lead to beanballs
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dmousey December 17 2016, 12:26:13 UTC
Ouch! That first line is amazing! Hug and peace~~~D

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tijuanagringo December 17 2016, 13:23:59 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

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murielle December 17 2016, 19:34:58 UTC
(Chortles with glee) The last line!

Wonderful take on the prompt! Love it!

Short. Sweet. And to the point. Bravo!

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tijuanagringo December 17 2016, 21:39:35 UTC
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Oh my dear I am so pleased you enjoyed my little response.
Thank you for your kind words.
<3
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magazhchi December 18 2016, 15:43:19 UTC

Ah! Brilliant.

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tijuanagringo December 18 2016, 16:01:59 UTC
Thank you!

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uselesstinrelic December 18 2016, 22:44:04 UTC
Reading this makes me want to hear the other half. Of course a lot of the fun is in the fact that we don't.

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tijuanagringo December 18 2016, 23:35:16 UTC
Um... this is a dialogue between two voices. Or, do I misunderstand what you mean by the other half? Curious.

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