12 December 2016

Dec 12, 2016 07:35

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Brushback Pitch  : a converse-action
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Why don’t you slide down a razor blade into a pool of alcohol.
What?
So’s your mama.
Now see here…
You see here.
What?
Yeah, that.
Say what?
You heard me.
Damn. Seems like you want me to shit or get off the pot.
Yeah, man, that’s it. Either you quit bitching or get out of the kitchen.
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sinnamongirl December 19 2016, 00:04:11 UTC
Another excellent entry! I always like the take you have on the prompts!

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tijuanagringo December 19 2016, 00:54:03 UTC
Thank you! So happy you like this.

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mamas_minion December 19 2016, 22:57:43 UTC
Nice poem, Loved the way you approached this.

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tijuanagringo December 19 2016, 23:04:59 UTC
Thanks! Am happy you enjoyed it.

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flipflop_diva December 20 2016, 19:51:04 UTC
This was great! And funny. I like your take on the prompt a lot!

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tijuanagringo December 20 2016, 20:28:49 UTC
Thank you very much for your comment and enjoyment!

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