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Oct 04, 2019 06:36


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Living rent-free in your head
No one will be eliminated. No robots will automatically capitalize
Every word at the beginning of each line. Or should that be
Each ward at the begging of every lion.   Or lien, as in
Real Estate.
               Yew no, yeas, thought in Spanish the Estate is not Real.
               Thaw cull eat, Roots Good. ( Read more... )

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karmasoup October 10 2019, 00:39:41 UTC
Ow. I think someone's had a bit too much cupertino.

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halfshellvenus October 11 2019, 06:32:46 UTC
Hahahaha! High score for this comment. ;)

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tijuanagringo October 11 2019, 14:10:10 UTC
Oh man I learned a new word today. I thought it was only a town in the San Francisco bay area, but no. It now means so much more. Thanks to you karmasoup for teaching me! And, in the name-changing spirit of my gameplay, I dedicate a warm cappuccino to you too.

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halfshellvenus October 11 2019, 06:31:33 UTC
I like the combination of stream-of-consciousness and word play, and the diversion into homonyms followed by an internal slapdown for doing it.

Pepsidon’t
I feel as if there is an entire meta-concept in there! It's either the medication you take to tell your body to knock it off, because that will NOT be tolerated...or it's the medication of regret, for having eaten the things you shouldn't and for which you are now suffering. :)

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tijuanagringo October 11 2019, 14:12:08 UTC
Um... and a wordshift joke on the man whom we US elected three years ago next month. Thanks for reading and comment :-)

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