Comments | timeenough4love: Short Script "The Doorway"

timeenough4love

Short Script "The Doorway"

Oct 20, 2005 20:14

This is a short 3-minute film I wrote for my Scriptwriting class. I was just curious what your guysis opinions are on it. I'm supposed to start revising it soon. Don't be too mean lol ( Read more... )

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I like it ashen_shugar469 October 21 2005, 19:34:05 UTC

I like it brother. Only one question though, what did caroline do to go to hell?

Re: I like it timeenough4love October 21 2005, 20:17:47 UTC

Thank you for reading. Caroline committed suicide.

Re: I like it ashen_shugar469 October 21 2005, 21:24:20 UTC

hmm, so visually we would see that in the wound?

daywalt5 October 22 2005, 08:54:01 UTC

I think it's a pretty interesting script. If it were me, I'd find some way to reword the "Now what luck it was" sentence in the voiceover, it seemed pretty awkward when I read it. Other than that, good work.