i am good.... not done reading yet, but here is half my comment.... i will continue reading this tomorrow after school!!!!
“I want to know if it really hurts being entered.” Minho said bluntly, looking up at Key. “You should know, right?” Key’s jaw dropped as he froze, then he shot a fierce glare towards his lover and growled at him.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HILARIOUS SHIZ RIGHT THERE. LOVE. IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“That good for nothin’ bastard!” Taemin hissed under his breath as he stormed down the streets. “When I get my hands on him… I am going to grab his and burn it with some , it'll looks so that he'll be on his knees begging me to his but I'll just him into the end of and shove that down into him so hard that'll he'll just want more of and won't be able to live without it. See if he ignores me ever again!”
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA I LAUGHED MY BOOTY OFF HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Lol, awwww, thank you :)) Oh, yeah, I guess I forgot to mention that Taem has a hobby of cross-dressing o: that's why everyone else think he's a girl. XD
Wow, thank you :) I believe this is the first time someone has complimented on my writing for this fic :D Well, enjoy the next chapter which is coming up real soon :)
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“I want to know if it really hurts being entered.” Minho said bluntly, looking up at Key. “You should know, right?” Key’s jaw dropped as he froze, then he shot a fierce glare towards his lover and growled at him.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HILARIOUS SHIZ RIGHT THERE. LOVE. IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“That good for nothin’ bastard!” Taemin hissed under his breath as he stormed down the streets. “When I get my hands on him… I am going to grab his and burn it with some , it'll looks so that he'll be on his knees begging me to
his but I'll just him into the end of and shove that down into him so hard that'll he'll just want more of and won't be able to live without it. See if he ignores me ever again!”
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA I LAUGHED MY BOOTY OFF HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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Loooool, yeah I was laughing out loud when writing this and my brother was giving me weird looks XD Glad to know you had a good laugh :D
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but, you're not going to make Minho and Onew really do that, are you???!!!!
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But I'm pretty positive that Taem will never allow anyone else to man-handle Minho, LOL
Thanks for reading & commenting! :)
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*smoky nose*
SERIOUSLY!!!!! this is *almost like* what i saw in my dreamsssssssss!!!!!!! XDDDDD WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!
"The incubus in the skirt" I LOLed at this!!! taem is wearing skirt?!! XDDDDDD
UPDATE ASAP!!!! hahaha XD
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Oh, yeah, I guess I forgot to mention that Taem has a hobby of cross-dressing o: that's why everyone else think he's a girl. XD
Thanks for reading & commenting! :D<3
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ahahahhahaha omgeeee onew! i love this! <333
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pick up lines, ftw! :)
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Well, enjoy the next chapter which is coming up real soon :)
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