He's After My Body : 08

May 23, 2011 16:00


Previous Chapters: 00 / 01 / 02 / 03 / 04 / 05 / 06 / 07

Chapter 8 )

!chapter, pairing: taemin/minho, title: he's after my body

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clariguard May 24 2011, 20:41:34 UTC
spot ^_^

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tiniedoll May 24 2011, 21:47:10 UTC
Hehe, hey how have you been? :D

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clariguard May 25 2011, 03:09:57 UTC
i am good.... not done reading yet, but here is half my comment.... i will continue reading this tomorrow after school!!!!

“I want to know if it really hurts being entered.” Minho said bluntly, looking up at Key. “You should know, right?” Key’s jaw dropped as he froze, then he shot a fierce glare towards his lover and growled at him.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HILARIOUS SHIZ RIGHT THERE. LOVE. IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“That good for nothin’ bastard!” Taemin hissed under his breath as he stormed down the streets. “When I get my hands on him… I am going to grab his and burn it with some , it'll looks so that he'll be on his knees begging me to
his but I'll just him into the end of and shove that down into him so hard that'll he'll just want more of and won't be able to live without it. See if he ignores me ever again!”

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA I LAUGHED MY BOOTY OFF HAHAHAHAHA!!!!

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tiniedoll May 25 2011, 18:15:11 UTC
That's good to hear :D & you still have school? When is it over? o:

Loooool, yeah I was laughing out loud when writing this and my brother was giving me weird looks XD Glad to know you had a good laugh :D

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minhosims May 25 2011, 11:19:08 UTC
make the next update soon..
but, you're not going to make Minho and Onew really do that, are you???!!!!

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tiniedoll May 25 2011, 12:58:01 UTC
Lol, hmmmm... I'm not sure yet. Guess we'll figure it out next chapter :D

But I'm pretty positive that Taem will never allow anyone else to man-handle Minho, LOL

Thanks for reading & commenting! :)

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minnie_hyunnie May 25 2011, 17:59:14 UTC
i love you!!! XDD waaaaaaaaaahhHH!!!! i love thissssssssssss!!! aigooOO!OOOOooO!OO!!! XDDDDD

*smoky nose*

SERIOUSLY!!!!! this is *almost like* what i saw in my dreamsssssssss!!!!!!! XDDDDD WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!

"The incubus in the skirt" I LOLed at this!!! taem is wearing skirt?!! XDDDDDD

UPDATE ASAP!!!! hahaha XD

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tiniedoll May 25 2011, 18:16:57 UTC
Lol, awwww, thank you :))
Oh, yeah, I guess I forgot to mention that Taem has a hobby of cross-dressing o: that's why everyone else think he's a girl. XD

Thanks for reading & commenting! :D<3

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anonymous May 30 2011, 00:30:11 UTC
“I made you come with one finger, imagine what else I could do to you with the rest.”

ahahahhahaha omgeeee onew! i love this! <333

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tiniedoll May 30 2011, 00:32:09 UTC
*bows, thank you, thank you ♫
pick up lines, ftw! :)

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anonymous June 1 2011, 02:36:39 UTC
I love the writing its amazing! cannot wait til the next chapters XD

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tiniedoll June 1 2011, 02:49:58 UTC
Wow, thank you :) I believe this is the first time someone has complimented on my writing for this fic :D
Well, enjoy the next chapter which is coming up real soon :)

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