I love how they said some things they regret it, but makes their future even better. I'm glad that he put the foot down and stopped chasing after her, and I'm glad putting some distance between them, I think they need it. And she will realize how much she really loves him.
I really love it so far, you are doing a fabulous job!
I love the angst too. I'm a sucker for it. Sad, but true. I generally think knock down fights like this help things. It's kind of hard to go back to the status quo afterwards, but, maybe that's a good thing. Their status quo was going no where fast.
In real life, I do wonder how many of these types of fights they have had. I know Emily said in the beginning they had two big ones. Apparently he has a wicked temper and we know she can be opinionated and stubborn (her words) so, there must have been times when they just went at it.
Oh poor Emily and poor David I just want to go there and hug the pair of them.
I knew we were heading for disaster after their 'date' as it was inevitable seeing as Emily was still with Michael (the douch) at the time.
I know it all works out in the end and that this is a much needed turning point for them, but it just makes it seem that much harder for them to get together, kinda makes it a miracle that they do get together as desitny desired but I also know there are many more rocks for them to cross to get to that point seeing as they have to learn to fight to be together.
Looking forward to the next part and seeing how it all works out to what we know does happen :)
Wow!! That was a powerful chapter!! I am definitely glad that this is the prequel. Knowing how they end up eventually gives me a reason to smile. Even if it is just fiction.
I think that when this is over I am definitely going to have to go back and reread the original story.
Great job! Even if I am completely heartbroken for them!! Mostly for David, but for Emily too! Gah!!
I think I will re-read the original as well! I am hopeful...that it comes together well. I've tried my best. But, I didn't write it with the knowledge that I would write a prequel. Their backstory kinda just developed as I went along. I'm trying to mold this one so it's fits the next one.
Team David. Can we make T-Shirts? j/k. I was actually curious as to who would side with who on this update. If I weren't the writer, I'd side with him, I think. But, I side with both since I wrote it ;)
Wow, this just slayed me. In a good way I mean. I normally do not like angst but this was so well written I felt like I was right in the middle of it. Just wow.
aww. thanks so much. Trust me, it slayed me to right it. I felt like I was ripping my heart out. I'm so glad you felt like it was real. Even though it's angsty and sad, the outcome is good. It's nice that you already know the ending. I wish we had that with bones sometimes!
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I love how they said some things they regret it, but makes their future even better. I'm glad that he put the foot down and stopped chasing after her, and I'm glad putting some distance between them, I think they need it. And she will realize how much she really loves him.
I really love it so far, you are doing a fabulous job!
Thank you! I'm looking forward to more!
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In real life, I do wonder how many of these types of fights they have had. I know Emily said in the beginning they had two big ones. Apparently he has a wicked temper and we know she can be opinionated and stubborn (her words) so, there must have been times when they just went at it.
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I knew we were heading for disaster after their 'date' as it was inevitable seeing as Emily was still with Michael (the douch) at the time.
I know it all works out in the end and that this is a much needed turning point for them, but it just makes it seem that much harder for them to get together, kinda makes it a miracle that they do get together as desitny desired but I also know there are many more rocks for them to cross to get to that point seeing as they have to learn to fight to be together.
Looking forward to the next part and seeing how it all works out to what we know does happen :)
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That was cruel of me. He hurts her most of all. It's a necessary evil so that david can father Claire. ;)
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I think that when this is over I am definitely going to have to go back and reread the original story.
Great job! Even if I am completely heartbroken for them!! Mostly for David, but for Emily too! Gah!!
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Please update soon!
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