I love that you went with the non-traditional ending. It really fit with how you've written this series. If the relationship honestly isn't working, then it just doesn't work, and that's okay. What you did made a lot of sense.
Overall, I loved the fic and where you took the story. Great job, sweetheart! ♥
Okay the ending killed me.But the truth hurts and the ending is real. Sometimes people are better off as friends than they are lovers. Great job and I continue to adore Aldis and I love that you brought Katie into the sequel ;)
So I'm not one of those fans who have to have a happy ending, but I kinda feel that this ending didn't feel right. I think its the fact that Jared *suddenly* has a husband and what have you. Ending it with the boys seperate but friends is good and I think would have worked wonderfully, but the Jared being married and the kid thing just felt forced.
Also you might want to add Jared/OMC in the pairing list. I know you did the written warning and all, but some folks just tend to check the pairings list.
Other than those 2 complaints I think this was a great story and well written.
I've been too much of a lurker to comment on any BB's this year but I felt like I needed to comment on this one. I'm going to go against the flow on this. The summary was interesting but what really enticed me to read this was the fact that the boys don't end up together. I found it refreshing that for once, everything didn't just magically work out. I ship J2 as hard as the next fangirl, but sometimes reality just doesn't play out in fairytales. Awesome writing, excellent story, believable characters. Great job!
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Overall, I loved the fic and where you took the story. Great job, sweetheart! ♥
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is good and I think would have worked wonderfully, but the Jared being married and the kid thing just felt forced.
Also you might want to add Jared/OMC in the pairing list. I know you did the written warning and all, but some folks just tend to check the pairings list.
Other than those 2 complaints I think this was a great story and well written.
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I'm going to go against the flow on this. The summary was interesting but what really enticed me to read this was the fact that the boys don't end up together. I found it refreshing that for once, everything didn't just magically work out. I ship J2 as hard as the next fangirl, but sometimes reality just doesn't play out in fairytales.
Awesome writing, excellent story, believable characters. Great job!
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