Planet of Doom

[titan5]

Title: Planet of Doom
Author: Titan5
Rating: PG
Characters: John, Rodney, Teyla, Ronon
Genre: Gen; humor and h/c for all
Word count: ~6000
Summary: It seemed like such a nice planet. Right up until it tried to kill them.
Author’s note: Set in season three so I can have Carson and Elizabeth. This was actually written for the planet prompt

Comments

[novembersga]

Welcome back!! Woohoo new fic! :D

“Would you not do that? What is it with you and Sheppard and sneaking up on people?”

Ronon grinned and started edging closer to the scientist. Teyla sighed. “Ronon.”

John looked back at his team. “Kids,” he drawled. “Don’t make me come over there."

Oh team, I missed you so. *Happy sigh* This is perfect. Great team banter & whump - Voices and characters are right on. I could easily picture them every step of the way. Well done!!

[titan5]

Thank you so much. I hope to be around a little more often now. I miss the team too - all the time. I always have to have the whump, but this time I was in the mood for some snark and humor as well. I'm glad you liked my version of the team having a really bad day. I think I've had a few days like this over the past year (LOL)!

[karri_kln1671]

Fantastic! I've really missed having a fun team romp on a planet. Really enjoyed that! :D

[titan5]

Thanks! I've been missing them a whole lot too.

[leesa_perrie]

LOL!! Oh, poor team!! It's just one thing after another!! Fun read!! :)

[titan5]

Yep, one of those Murphy's Law days where you wonder why you got out of bed. They'll be glad to hide in the infirmary for a while after that. Many thanks and glad you liked!!

[drufan]

Titan! This was a lovely little jaunt thru the woods, taking in the flora and fauna. Oh what a lovely day for an adventure!

It's so good to see a story. Hope your arm has healed and you are able to get more of these gems out.

[titan5]

Thanks! Good to see you're still around - so many have moved on.

Arm is getting better a bit at a time. I can type semi-normally for short periods and I'm working on expanding that. If I ever get to eat or brush my teeth right handed again I'll really be thrilled!!! Since my lovely insurance company bailed on me, I've prescribed myself writing fanfiction for my continued therapy. At least it's fun!!

[ladysorka]

This is an extremely fun team fic. Talk about the planet of Murphy's Law.

[titan5]

Yeah, I was craving team and whump and snark. I actually thought about calling it something like A Day with Murphy's Law, but the Planet of Doom thing popped in my head and fit with the "planet" prompt I was actually going for at the time. Many thanks!!