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[tkws]

It's sucks when you have nothing to talk about, and people are there to talk to, but when you really need to talk to somebody, nobody is around. I get on here, and it's the same. I thought maybe somebody would be on

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[novembersgrl]

I guess I should comment more often. That is a good poem, I think you write real well Matt. *massive massive hugs*

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[tkws]

I should comment more often to your Journal. thanks for what you said.*Big ass hug back*

-Matt

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[novembersgrl]

You are welcome :oD

[queenpunkitty]

ok, i am posting what i think about that poem, because thats what you want, is for some feedback, so... truthfully i think its good, i think its really good, the only part i dont like is the end about king james, sorta sounds like it was added in to find the end, but do note this is my opinion, dont take it to heart, several other people may have a different one, i do think you are a good writer, but some advice, dont always want other peoples opinions, WRITE FOR YOURSELF not for anyone else, hope i didnt make ya mad, happy thoughts... also note my writing isnt all that great either, several people always say it is, but i dont thinks so, so really keep in mind that, "you are your worst critic"

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[tkws]

Thanks for the comment. I thought the end kind sucked, and it was rushed, just to finish, but overall I like it. Thank you for the good feedback. I do write for myself, but when I write about other people, I want them to see it, and when I am urged to write about something in my life, I'd like to share it with people, that's why I said what I said. Why else would I post a poem in the public eye? I want people to see it, and talk to me about it. Thanks for the comment, it means a lot.

-Matt