Hetalia: Remembrance

Feb 14, 2010 14:37

Title: Remembrance
Rating: K
Genre: Romance
Characters/Pairings: HRE, Germany, Italy. Established GerIta.
Summary: Italy's been distracted of late, and Germany's getting worried.
Notes: Fill from the kinkmeme, a double-request fill. The first was for what other nations keep in their storages, and if cleaning it up could solve some left behind issues ( Read more... )

fanfic, *hetalia, kinkmeme

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inuyashacooks February 14 2010, 21:42:26 UTC
:DDDDDDDD THAT WAS AWESOOOMMMME!

aside from your characterization (which was really great) and the jhseafewkjfhger-inducing cute of the whole thing, i really liked the way it's written- the structure of it :D ah, and i really like the atmosphere of this fic too :D

and a prussia omake. WELL THAT'S JUST AWESOME.

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tokene February 18 2010, 12:26:14 UTC
ffff thank you 8D Your compliments always mean so much to me, because I love your writing &hearts

Thank goodness. About the characterization, that is. I'm always a little twitchy when I write for someone new.

And thank you 8D For all the comments. AND I JUST REALISED THAT PRUSSIA PRETTY MUCH HAS A MONOPOLY ON MY OMAKES AS A WHOLE.

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scnoes February 15 2010, 01:16:42 UTC
i-i-i'm anon who drew the pic. the fic deserves a lot better fanart, i'm sorry it was so bad, h-hahah (though i'm glad you liked it anyway) ♥♥
anyway, am so glad i saw this in the comm! partly because i'm happy to re-read it again, and also to read your other fics!! i love your writing ♥

& happy valentine's day & chinese new year!! ´q` even though it's past midnight now, hahaha

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tokene February 18 2010, 12:54:56 UTC
You have my love forever 8D
/is still living off the high of being utterly flattered by fanart

And don't say that, I love the way you did it! And a friend of mine said that she liked it as well 8DDb
/hugs you

Aww, thank you very much! I'm extremely glad to know that you love my writing ^ // ^

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vivecka February 17 2010, 21:36:21 UTC
Oh, so nice. Well done!

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tokene February 18 2010, 12:55:13 UTC
Thank you very much! 8D

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tiger_azul February 19 2010, 14:49:03 UTC
You wrote them both so well. Italy is still a cheerful ditz, but his grief over HRE gives him a lot more depth, and it was nice to see Germany lose a little of that usually unshakable self-control!
And the ending wasn’t abrupt, you finished it exactly where it needed to finish. As for a continuation... I don’t think this story needs one as it captures everything so brilliantly already - Italy’s sorrow and Germany’s regained memory all interweaved with flashes from the past and topped off with that wonderful climax. I don’t think there’s any more that needs to be said! ♥
Superbly done, I loved it! (in case I didn’t make that clear enough already!)

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tokene February 19 2010, 17:21:38 UTC
Thank you! And times like these really try people, I suppose. I'm glad that you liked my characterization! :3

Ahhhhh. Goodness, you gave me such wonderful feedback, thank you again for that. Good to know that it seemed complete enough; I just really needed to know what people thought about it.

> w < Glad to know that you loved it. &hearts

(And I apologize for not commenting on *your* fics of late OTL)

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tiger_azul February 21 2010, 01:48:41 UTC
Hey, no worries! I haven't been around LJ much lately anyway, what with pesky RL eating away into all my writing time ♥

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kaliona March 19 2010, 14:44:03 UTC
OK, you've probably gotten enough of comments like these, but EEEEEEEEEEEEE! What an adorable, simple little thing to read in the morning! There are sentences in here that absolutely made me melt! ♥♥

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tokene March 20 2010, 14:24:41 UTC
I never get tired of them, trust me &hearts

Thank you very much! :D Glad to hear that you enjoyed it~!

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