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The Scarecrow Plot - Part 2

Jul 20, 2006 01:19

The Scarecrow Plot - Part 2
by Toketsu Puurin
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own the Scarecrow, Bruce Wayne, or any other character mentioned in this fic.
Summary: What happens when The Batman's deepest fear takes hold of his life? What happens when it's not a fear he's ever been prepared to deal with?

( Part 2 )

Comments 7

jij July 20 2006, 09:30:59 UTC

What's really frightening? How many of Bruce's horrible nightmares are close to DC canon. :-(

There are so many places you could go with this it's not even funny! I guess first you'd have to decide if you want an upbeat or a depressing ending and work backwards from there a bit? Are you going to have him deal with this all alone, or will he interact with people? That is, is this story meant to focus on Bruce's internal struggle, or watch his relationships with the people around him? Either way could be extremely cool.

toketsupuurin July 24 2006, 01:33:58 UTC

Heh that was the whole point. Some of the dreams were digs at plot points that I despised.

The stephanie, leslie, zsasz dream was one of the major ones.

Glad you liked it ^_^

damos July 20 2006, 09:46:57 UTC

Well... I can't wait to see what you come up with. This part does a good job of upping the anxiety.

I'm not sure yet if the dreams are the result of the toxin or a result of Bruce's anxiety about the toxin... which is good.

As for ideas... hrm. You could make him playboy Bruce and thus powerless to help those around him in his life. You could make him ... hrm. You could make him seeing children die trying to emulate him... you know... little kids dress up in batsuits and run around getting killed by gangs, thugs, etc. That'd get to him. Have other superheroes convinced this is his idea so Supes. et al. shun him. Oooops. Plot bunny. Hrm.

toketsupuurin July 24 2006, 01:35:13 UTC

heh. man those evil little bunnies. Glad you liked it.

dragonbat2006 July 20 2006, 13:30:11 UTC

Oh, there's not enough good Scarecrow material out there! Thanks for adding to it! Eagerly awaiting your next installment!

toketsupuurin July 24 2006, 01:34:32 UTC

thanks! I hope I can keep it up.

WAAUW!!! amelia_1987 January 24 2007, 18:20:38 UTC

That was Truly AWESOME!!! But considering It's been over 6 months since U posted this! Would be A REALLY Bad Idea to request -No BEG ;D- 4 the rest of this -Infinitely PROMISING- Storyline?!?! (Coz I would ya know^_~) Coz this = Really A Totally Original Idea & I've Absolutely Loved it so far!!! ^_^ What Esp. got to me was the line:
Dreams where he killed the hope that one man represented to the rest of the world with a small green bullet.

Bruce forced the scowl from his face as he walked into the board meeting of Wayne Enterprises.
(Now I realize I MAY Be a BIT Biased, (As Superman/Batman = my newly found Addiction! -& A MAGNIFICENT yet Tragic Story by "Damo_in_japan" about this very storyline just made me EVEN More.....(Obsessively)Addicted;P to this concept :D!!-) But I REALLY & Truly Believe that this has the Potential to be A Truly Epic Saga (of Love/Friendship/Life)!!! & it would be an Indescribable Waste to Not FINISH This Fascinating Fic ( ... )