LJ Idol, Season 10, Week 19 - Invitation

[tonithegreat]

When last we left Bryn Stilwell, PI, she and Jim Sommers appeared to have extricated themselves from a potentially deadly situation, and then they traded the tension of the situation for a resolution of the steamy tension between them.The day didn't get less surreal after the shower

Comments

[swirlsofblue]

An intriguing piece, really liked the detail of the descriptions

[tonithegreat]

Thanks!

[rayaso]

An excellent addition to the series. Your descriptions and details were great. It will be interesting to see where this leads.

[tonithegreat]

Thank you. Hopefully this moved things along enough to stand alone okay. I wanted to get them to the little hideaway, but did not budget my writing time well enough last week to get that much down. On the one hand, it's good to leave in a place where I still want to write more, but I also don't want the piece to be disappointing.

[i_17bingo]

The mystery of Jim Sommers deepens... I'm really enjoying Bryn's tale, and I was quite excited to see that this would be a continuation of it.

[tonithegreat]

Ah, I'm really glad it is still fun for you! I want to stay in idol for as long as I can, but when I do get voted off the island I definitely want to work on this more. It feels great for it to be back alive in my mind.

[penpusher]

Really vivid descriptions and clever details... no man is an island, but Jim Sommers is starting to get pretty close!

[tonithegreat]

Island puns! I need to drop some "no man is an island" when discussing island problems at work. :-) Thanks for your comment!

[eternal_ot]

This made for a great read. I excited to know more about Jim Sommers.

[tonithegreat]

Really glad you're still enjoying the tale! I am happy to be working on it.