LJ Idol - Week 21 - The Way Back

[tonithegreat]

In the first dream, there was a delicious sense of ease. There was only blackness but it felt so good not to be striving anymore. Somehow everything had become relaxed. No more aching shoulders. No more tight neck. Her ankles and knees didn’t ache anymore and it felt so good to float without form

Comments

[roina_arwen]

I love all the details in this! Great work.

[tonithegreat]

Thank you! I think your piece last week helped inspire my take on the topic. I’m glad you continued it this week.

[kittenboo]

Great take on the topic!

[tonithegreat]

Thank you!

[me_sonrei]

This reminds me (in a good way) of Passages, by Connie Willis. Well done!

[tonithegreat]

Oh, I’ll have to check it out. I’ve been dreaming vivid dreams in this time of quarantine, so it’s fun to see how people write about dreaming.

[d0gs]

This felt super realistic! You have such a talent at creating atmosphere and great descriptions!

[tonithegreat]

Thank you! I’ve been dreaming really vividly in the last few weeks, maybe because I can sleep a little longer and a little later during pandemic scheduling, so it was fun to try to write some dreams.

[lyssa027]

I really loved this

[tonithegreat]

I’m glad you enjoyed!