[drabble] クレッシェンド: 雨の中で、踊ってキスをする。 crescendo: dance and kiss in the rain

Nov 22, 2012 06:05

∞ クレッシェンド: 雨の中で、踊ってキスをする。 crescendo: dance and kiss in the rain
→ EXO: Suho/Kris; Fluff, PG-13, 887 words
! special thanks to anyajulia and her boyfriend demonessryu for the beta work! I wish you two more years of faithfulness and LOVE!! (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
!! you can find the Vietnamese translation here, with many thanks to betum dearie ♥
!!! also I'd like to thank Abbey sweetheart ( Read more... )

fic: krisuho, fandom: exo, fic: drabble

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kira_min18 November 22 2012, 16:02:31 UTC
/SCREAMING

HOW IS THIS SO BEAUTIFUL /sobs/ kichie nim~~ all the musical terms that you used here seem so perfect even though i don't know the exact meanings of some of the terms ;A; but the way you placed each term with the description, i could understand what they mean <333

ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN LEADERSHIP HANDS DOWN MY LIFE IS COMPLETE ;W;

and you really really like rain, don't you? :33 cuddle weather but i've got no one to cuddle with /curls alone in comforter/

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torakiss November 24 2012, 09:28:57 UTC
KIRAH-NIM ♥ *(*´∀`*)☆


... )

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kimpoi03 November 22 2012, 17:50:14 UTC
kichieeeeee i said i was gonna sleep already but i was really itching to read this because i've been waiting for you to post a fic and then aksdjhf i read this on my phone but i had to turn my laptop on again because i just HAVE to leave a something on this beautiful piece of literature ;A;

ASKLDJFHASKDJFH

KICHIE YOU NEVER FAIL TO AMAZE ME WITH YOUR FICS, NGL
i had this ... feeling of serenity when i was reading this tbh (..also when i read your other krisho fics) and i love how you wrote every word ;____;

i am so proud of youuuu.

"So I'm bringing you, my Junmyeonie, away from your deep realm of thoughts and back to reality..."

"Welcome back, my Junmyeon-ah. Back to your reality. Your reality with me."

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ← 20 hearts for you because i love you.

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torakiss November 24 2012, 09:37:55 UTC
KiMKiM ♥ c(≧∇≦ c )

you are such a sweetheart, bb. ;www; thank you for always supporting me and reminding me that my fics aren't crap. and i'm sorry for making you wait for so long. you do know i'm also already working on your chanbaek right? ㅋㅋ although i think i won't be able to write it well because it has been a while since i last wrote MILD angst, but i'll still do my best because i want to give you something as a token of my gratitude!

p.s. i was wondering why 20 hearts of all the numbers but 하하 i AM getting old orz 시아랑해 and thank you for reading and going out of your way just to comment on this ;____;

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kimpoi03 November 25 2012, 18:33:09 UTC
THANK YOU, dear Kichie, for writing.
Keep doing what you're doing because you're doing it perfectly :)
yes \o/~ i am still waiting for your first ever chanbaek fic and no, i am not pressuring you. take your time bb~ ♥
and.... thank you for making this fandom a sweeter place ♥♥♥

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oldriane November 23 2012, 05:30:57 UTC
"Welcome back, my Junmyeon-ah. Back to your reality. Your reality with me."

hELP

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torakiss November 24 2012, 09:44:43 UTC
omg dear how can i help you? i hope you're okay!! c(T~T c )

and thank you so much for reading and commenting!! ♥♥

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dee_fml November 23 2012, 06:06:27 UTC
/sobs

poetic. fluid. perfect.
This isn't just a slice of life, it's a slice of poetry, a masterpiece.

kitty-ssi, everything here is perfect. i can quote the whole thing. and i'm not even kidding! it's hard to pick the best line here, because everything was just perfectly written, flowing like a symphony. I really loved how you used music to let the story flow. Impeccable word choice. Like I've said before, you can make mundane events extraordinary.

you're really my senpai! /bows down
oh and this fic totally deserves a standing ovation
*insert standing ovation, ooops but I can't cause my prof is looking at me funny. anyways, i will do my standing ovation when i get back to my room*

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torakiss November 24 2012, 10:12:16 UTC
Dee bb ♥♥♥ ヾ(>▽<。ヾ )

I was worried that people won't be able to understand this well ;~~; omg, nuu, not perfect ;~~; but I'm glad you like it!! I just got the inspiration from this post (I think haha) and I kinda miss hearing musical terms in real life (although I suck at playing musical instruments ㅋㅋ). Thank you so much for giving me so much encouragement ;u; this is the best I can do to repay your kindness ;u;

*sits down and watches you do your standing ovation in your room*

P.S. I miss you ;u;

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torakiss November 26 2012, 11:21:03 UTC
Anya unniiiiiee ヽ(;▽;)ノ

I can never thank you enough for being so kind to me ;~~~; For all the gifts you've sent and for tolerating my exo spazzing and even to the point of beta-ing my works although it's not our ultimate otp-related nor our ultimate boy group-related. ;~~;

I'm glad you like(?) this drabble! And OMG! that photo is so perfect!!! I... I... I think I need to watch it since I haven't watched it before. OMG, so beautiful, I feel like crying ;~~~;

I love you unnie ;u;

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