Retreat Within - A Shadorma

[torrens_v_casus]

Another Shadorma, the first that I've written in some months. But for some reason when I woke up I felt like writing and thus here we have the first poem I've written since March, the first that wasn't a request since before even that.

Retreat Within

Comments

[kawaii_gaara]

I really like the combination where you're saying retreat (which can sound negative) and yet allow yourself to be wrapped in warmth (positive). It really emphasizes the importance of needing to step back and look once in a while to find yourself and not just focus on the retreat part. I really like this piece~<33333

[torrens_v_casus]

It was a bit of a play on words I suppose, it could be retreat as in withdrawing or perhaps now that I take into account the rest retreat as is a secluded vacation. But I'm honored and glad that you enjoyed it.

[kawaii_gaara]

Hm hm I think it worked out well~ and oh yeah~ I have it memories'd~ =^W^= <33333 wooooot~ I made up a word~ XDDD;;;