That's beautiful. I think my favorite part is the thunder and the lightning and the water running down. I love the moist air after that smells all fresh and new after. I always feel like starting over after thunderstorms, they're nature's backspace button.
Sky, if I could manage to get to where you are, someone would have to pry me away from you; I am that enamored.
That last line, especially--so beautiful. That line would kill me even if rain didn't happen to remind me of the girl I'm in love with. Maybe even more so, dude.
the *point* is to beget more drama. otherwise, where will the life-giving attention come from? also, you have groupies for your poeticalness. hello, Irony, sup with you, man?
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That last line, especially--so beautiful. That line would kill me even if rain didn't happen to remind me of the girl I'm in love with. Maybe even more so, dude.
*tackles*
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also, you have groupies for your poeticalness. hello, Irony, sup with you, man?
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Honestly though, after a semester of Roundy's poetry class, I damn well better have groupies, even if they are seven hours away.
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