Comments | tourofduty: moar tennis fic even if i was supposed to be writing NASCAR...

tourofduty

moar tennis fic even if i was supposed to be writing NASCAR...

Sep 27, 2007 18:08

marat/tomas. 1, 608 words. the beginning of a beginning. for di, my love.

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otp: marat safin/tomas berdych, sports: tennis, writing: fic

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tourofduty September 28 2007, 15:03:16 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

eternaldominion September 28 2007, 18:14:53 UTC

“He cute, sort of like… pony.”

That line was made of absolute win. xDD

tourofduty September 28 2007, 18:21:19 UTC

HAHA. And brought on by the fact that Tomas shakes his head like one when he's excited or nervous.

inez79 September 29 2007, 02:36:11 UTC

Hi! I really liked some of your images...amd overall i thought the fic was pretty well constructed - I don't really 'see' this pair, to be honest, but nonetheless I enjoyed reading this. I particularly liked this characterisation ( ... )

tourofduty September 29 2007, 03:21:35 UTC

Hi, wow, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a detailed response. I guess Marat/Tomas is, like I said, an aquired taste and I'm very in love with them because I've spent the last... I guess year weaving this entire story about them with quinoline.

Thank you so much for all the compliment AND for the concrit. :) The numbers were used to create a snapshot situation. Most of the stories I write, since I'm terrible with longer fics, are snapshot type stories or drabbles or one shot fics because I tend to... really lose the point if I try to go too long. I'm sorry if this sounds like I'm making up excuses -- because I'm not, believe me. I know that my stories could always, always use quite a bit of polishing up.

tranquil_eyes September 29 2007, 13:57:57 UTC

Hello! I'm here by way of Di's rec =)

This fic was AWESOME! The dialogue was superb (I was going to quote but then realised I couldn't decide which lines I liked best \=) and the little details. Oh yeah and the pony bit was GENIUS XD I've never ever considered this pairing, but frankly you've got me sold.

tourofduty September 29 2007, 15:42:24 UTC

Welcome! :D

Thank you so, so much. Seriously it means a lot when I get compliments on dialogue and characterization so thank you so much. And ha! Enjoy your stay in Marat/Tomas world. It's very nice. ;)

ae__ October 6 2007, 22:30:38 UTC

I very much like this! It's so.. compact, somehow. I'm not sure why I like it so much, but it made me all giddy and stuff :D

Dinara figures it out.

“He bring you this,” she says. She smiles. She offers him a donut wrapped in a napkin and Marat ignores it. “He cute, sort of like… pony.”

Marat snatches the food from her and leaves the lobby without a word.

I especially love this, Dina is so great!

tourofduty October 7 2007, 00:14:12 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much for reading!