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tourofduty

Sep 27, 2007 18:08

marat/tomas. 1, 608 words. the beginning of a beginning. for di, my love.

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liroa15 January 6 2008, 09:50:18 UTC

I love the sort of awkward staccato rhythm that their relationship has in this. It really seems to fit Marat.

tourofduty January 12 2008, 00:27:37 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

mrflibbleseyes January 25 2008, 23:45:12 UTC

This is just gorgeous. I really like the progress through the fic of Marat accepting Tomas that little bit more. Beautiful written as well.

tourofduty January 26 2008, 03:11:03 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much. :)