My Fanfic - Viewfinder

[toyakoya]

Hong Kong is very similar to Tokyo. Sometimes, when he’s standing in the heart of Shinjuku, he would look up and the skyscrapers, neon lights, and oversized billboards would blur together. The push-and-shove of people, milling and aimless, focused and hurried, moved around him and bumped past him; he felt like a tiny,

Comments

[jamie310]

Wow intense and very descriptive but loved ever bit(*&*)
Will there be more?

[toyakoya]

Thank you for the comment =)

I'm not sure about continuing this story but there will probably be more VF fic in the future ^^

[ayune01]

it was very nice. i cant wait to read the 2nd chapter.*_*

[toyakoya]

Thanks for the comment ^^;;
Not sure if there will ever be a chapter 2 though.

[loussi_leb_ru]

I am surprised that Asami isn't sending Akihito to he most expensive psycholog.

[toyakoya]

Hahaha ^^;;

Thanks for the comment =)

[toyakoya]

Thank you! =)

[ayamemishi]

I don't really know what to say, except that this fic was so good. I like the darker side of things with Asami and Akihito, because in the real world, their relationship would be super fucked up. The last few lines, and the ambiguity (does Asami know?) is wonderful.

[toyakoya]

Thank you very much!
It's incredible how we are all willing to suspend our sense of realism for Yamane Ayano ^_^;;