Deeper // poetry

[tragicmouse]

I wrote this yesterday...just kind of came to me.
The first line was going to be a tweet, in fact, and the rest just spilled out.
If I get some time, I may go into iMovie and add all the words to the video one day, but I got impatient...

Comments and critiques welcomed.

Comments

[headinacloud]

The rhythm, the tone of your voice, the determination to explain is inherent in your voice. It's sharp & speaks.

[tragicmouse]

Thanks darling...for hearing it. I think my Four-wing's growing...I've been putting out a lot of things that take a lot out of me, creatively speaking. <3