Nov 29, 2007 15:12
“I was green, greener than the hill … where the flowers grew and the sun shone still … now I’m darker than the deepest sea … just hand me down, give me a place to be … and I was strong, strong in the sun … I thought I’d see when day is done … now I’m weaker than the palest blue … oh, so weak in this need for you …”
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This is completely amazing, by the way.
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Absolutely brilliant brilliant story. I'm all flaily or I'd leave a better comment. :D
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Well, I made the mistake of reading this before going to bed. Now I'll have sad dreams, despite the ending. It still kind of has the somber mood of the rest of the fic, even with the hopefulness. For a minute I thought it was going to end badly and I was preparing myself to start sniffling.
And I really want to hug Sirius, but I'm afraid he'd hit me, or something. Heh.
Beautiful, as always. It's good to see you posting fic. You're like, a goldmine of goodfic.
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It still kind of has the somber mood of the rest of the fic, even with the hopefulness. For a minute I thought it was going to end badly and I was preparing myself to start sniffling.
Well, after Combat Rock, I can see why you'd think that! I think I've got a reputation for ripping hearts out, now ... er ... is it wrong that I'm happy about that? :)
And I really want to hug Sirius, but I'm afraid he'd hit me, or something. Heh.
I don't think he'd hit a girl! Maybe he'd run away from you, though.
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I love a good fic where things aren't sugar-coated or perfect, but ends up true to both the characters and situation.
That's exactly what I was going for! I'm so glad it worked for you.
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