Nick Drake

Nov 29, 2007 15:12

“I was green, greener than the hill … where the flowers grew and the sun shone still … now I’m darker than the deepest sea … just hand me down, give me a place to be … and I was strong, strong in the sun … I thought I’d see when day is done … now I’m weaker than the palest blue … oh, so weak in this need for you …”

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trailingoff November 29 2007, 21:34:13 UTC
Thanks so much for commenting! I'm glad it worked for you :)

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gollisd November 29 2007, 05:02:41 UTC
Fcck, I need a cigarette.

This is completely amazing, by the way.

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trailingoff November 29 2007, 21:38:43 UTC
Cool, thank you :) So glad you liked it!

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wook77 November 29 2007, 05:03:34 UTC
This is just about brilliant. God, I'm so glad you posted this when you did so that I could rec it on the rs_prophet oh man, am I happy!

Absolutely brilliant brilliant story. I'm all flaily or I'd leave a better comment. :D

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trailingoff November 29 2007, 21:40:18 UTC
Ooh, that would be beyond awesome! Thanks so much :) It's great to hear you enjoyed the story! And yeah, I'm glad you guys have started up the prophet again, because I really missed it.

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spacefragments November 29 2007, 05:06:54 UTC
“I feel like I’m nothing, Moony,”

Well, I made the mistake of reading this before going to bed. Now I'll have sad dreams, despite the ending. It still kind of has the somber mood of the rest of the fic, even with the hopefulness. For a minute I thought it was going to end badly and I was preparing myself to start sniffling.
And I really want to hug Sirius, but I'm afraid he'd hit me, or something. Heh.

Beautiful, as always. It's good to see you posting fic. You're like, a goldmine of goodfic.

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trailingoff November 29 2007, 21:46:31 UTC
Thanks so much for commenting! I'm glad it worked for you, but I hope it didn't give you sad dreams.

It still kind of has the somber mood of the rest of the fic, even with the hopefulness. For a minute I thought it was going to end badly and I was preparing myself to start sniffling.

Well, after Combat Rock, I can see why you'd think that! I think I've got a reputation for ripping hearts out, now ... er ... is it wrong that I'm happy about that? :)

And I really want to hug Sirius, but I'm afraid he'd hit me, or something. Heh.

I don't think he'd hit a girl! Maybe he'd run away from you, though.

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mizzmarvel November 29 2007, 05:12:22 UTC
Very sweet, but very, very realistic. I love a good fic where things aren't sugar-coated or perfect, but ends up true to both the characters and situation. Nicely done.

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trailingoff November 30 2007, 04:13:52 UTC
Thanks very much for commenting :)

I love a good fic where things aren't sugar-coated or perfect, but ends up true to both the characters and situation.

That's exactly what I was going for! I'm so glad it worked for you.

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