Help request with a letter in English

Nov 12, 2010 14:52


Dearest colleagues,
I haven't been translating into English for ages))) 
Could you have a look at a short passage of a simple letter that I've done and give me your suggestions on how to improve it.

OOO ZZZ Production company on request of “Channel 1” starts working on a documentary film, under the working title “XXX”.

The aim of the film is to tell ( Read more... )

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poeticalpanther November 12 2010, 19:24:43 UTC
OOO ZZZ Production company on at request of “Channel 1” starts begins working on a documentary film, under the working title “XXX”.

The aim of the film is to tell people about the ways how to avoid getting tricked by “virtual frauds”, and about how government services/state authorities’ actions will preventing hackers' attacks in future.

In October 2010 FBI officials arrested a criminal cybergroup which had illegally accessed to secret data related to the accounts of a number of companies, and had used such this information for to embezzlement of US$220 million dollars. However, the hackers failed to complete their plan.: They they were arrested. By estimate, It is estimated that the total of all losses sustained by companies through hackers’ fault activity amounts to US$70 million dollars. 22 out of the 37 alleged criminals are Russian nationals.

In the age of a the global spread of virtual money, the problem of hackers' attacks becomes more pressing. Cash payments are now considered as an outdated form of monetary relations. We ( ... )

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theinfamousj December 10 2010, 23:17:57 UTC
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