Team Gen: The Longest Day

Mar 14, 2007 11:49

Title: The Longest Day
Author: nicolen
Team: gen
Prompt: Summertime
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Ron, Harry, Hermione, Remus
Warnings: Character Death
Length: 1835 words
Summary: Midsummer's Day - the day of judgement

The Longest Day )

prompt: summer, team gen, fic

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abigail89 March 14 2007, 17:40:40 UTC
Thanks for NOT killing Harry. This has been a rough fest with so many of the writers killing him off.

Well done. It's a very nice imagined moment at the end of the war.

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nicolen March 15 2007, 05:42:26 UTC
Thank you! I've written a couple of other stories set after the end of the war where Harry's died, but I thought I'd try something different this time. I'm pleased you enjoyed it :)

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magnifica7 March 14 2007, 18:11:36 UTC
An fine take on THE END. And I very much like your writing style! :)

Brava! :)

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nicolen March 15 2007, 05:43:09 UTC
Thank you! I'm pleased you enjoyed it :)

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hildigunnur March 14 2007, 19:38:22 UTC
Day of judgment indeed. Love the ending with them watching the sunset, rhymes well with the opening.

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nicolen March 15 2007, 05:44:09 UTC
Thank you! I thought it was quite an appropriate way to finish the story myself, so am thrilled you loved it :)

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aome March 15 2007, 00:10:39 UTC
I liked the justice of Neville/Bellatrix and Remus/Fenrir. Nice double-meaning in the title.

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nicolen March 15 2007, 05:45:49 UTC
Thank you! I really hope that we see Neville and Remus getting some justice in canon. I'm pleased you liked the title - I'm crap at thinking of titles and thought it was a little naff at first, but it grew on me :)

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kerosinkanister March 16 2007, 06:34:17 UTC
My favorite part of this fic were the Trio friendship bits. It was really nice to see that.

I see your comments on Neville above. I hope he gets a shining moment but I'm afraid he or Luna will die.

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nicolen March 16 2007, 19:26:27 UTC
Thank you! I'm thrilled you liked the Trio friendship bits - they caused me a *lot* of trouble when I was writing it.

Agree with you about Neville - I really don't want to see him die...

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