Close Your Eyes and Count to Ten; Claude/Bennet; Heroes; NC-17

Sep 10, 2007 16:12

Title: Close Your Eyes and Count to Ten
Rating: NC17/FRAO
Words: 4015
Pairing: Claude/Bennet (mentions of past as well)
Summary: "There is a far-away familiarity in this scene, like a memory long forgotten." Claude visits Bennet. Set near the S1 finale.
Warnings: Graphic sex
A/N: Many thanks to futuresoon for her read-through and corrections, and also for ( Read more... )

bennet/claude, slashyheroes15, heroes, fic

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veetvoojagig September 10 2007, 09:34:04 UTC
Oh, wow. Dude. That's amaing.

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tricias_flaunt September 11 2007, 04:49:49 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! And Happy Birthday!

*offers morally grey cake*

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veetvoojagig September 11 2007, 08:23:31 UTC
Oooh, morally grey cake!

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ctheinvisible17 September 10 2007, 09:36:56 UTC
I really enjoyed this. Your voices for the characters are pretty good.

I like how subconciously Bennet knew Claude was there. And Claude showed his sweet side by watching him sleep. Awwww... ^_^

This was great! Thanks for sharing.

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tricias_flaunt September 11 2007, 04:54:45 UTC
Thank you! I love the boys and I'm glad you think they're in character. Their relationship is so subconcious in many levels, so I just couldn't resist inserting that part at the end. Glad you enjoyed it! You're welcome.

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tju_tju_tju_tju September 10 2007, 14:46:07 UTC
That was excellent. Extremely well-written. LOVED LOVED LOVED it. :D

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tricias_flaunt September 11 2007, 05:07:42 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your comment. Excellent Claude/Bennet morally greyness is high praise. :)

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liritarofrohan September 10 2007, 15:04:52 UTC
Quite amazing. *Grins*

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tricias_flaunt September 11 2007, 04:55:57 UTC
It's your birthday too! Although I'm aware that I've passed it by a... few hours (I hope). *proffers morally grey cake* Happy birthday!

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

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liritarofrohan September 11 2007, 05:21:23 UTC
*Huggles*

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fantasticpants September 10 2007, 16:41:07 UTC
I really liked this fic. Nice flow and descriptiveness, and an angsty bittersweet feel to it.

Loved your Bennet-voice and their talk about forgiveness.

And smooth&silky cover girl Claude is an interesting image indeed (though he is pretty anorexic, really). xD

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tricias_flaunt September 11 2007, 05:06:23 UTC
Oh wow, I really like your work, especially your Claude-voice, and I'm flattered that you liked this. I don't know where I got the cover girl idea from, it just sounded like Claude to be overtly sarcastic (he eats pretzels, thinnish perhaps, but not anorexic XD)

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

MISTAH BENNET IS MY HERO.

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