SGA Fic: Flying With a Broken Wing - Part 2 of 2

[tridget]

Title: Flying With a Broken Wing
Author: tridget
Recipient: kriadydragon
Rating: T (for mild language)
Word Count: ~22,000
Spoilers: Spoilers for "Enemy at the Gate."
Warnings: Brief references to an AU character death.
Prompt: Learning to Fly (Sheppard has wings, Sheppard rides something with wings, Sheppard turns into a dragon, something else entirely).

Comments

[mecurtin]

What a *wonderful* story. I agree with the person who said it would make an excellent graphic novel, the pictures are very clear in my mind's eye.

Of course I love to the max that John is rescued by his Team, and that they're driven by Rodney's quixotic desire to help a John Sheppard, any one, to make up for the one he lost.

I confess, I LOLed at Carson's mutation.

[tridget]

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the story and that the images were very clear. I really did feel for the AU Rodney, too and his attempt to cope with loss.

Carson's mutation made me chuckle, too, as soon as it came to mind. Later, I wondered about whether or not he would have to be sheared.

[mecurtin]

Speaking of LOLs, I forgot to mention earlier: I love the sonic screwdriver! heeeeeee.

[tavabean]

Beautiful story. Thank you so much for writing it!

[tridget]

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[kiranovember]

wonderful story!

[tridget]

Thank you.

[danceswithgary]

Great story!

[tridget]

Thank you.

[alzarin_red]

This is a great story - very moving, especially the end with the description of John's flight. You had a nice twist on the characters from different universes - the two Rodneys were a bit the same, but also not quite, which works very well. I am glad that we get a happy ending though; I kind of needed one today, so thank you for that.

[tridget]

Thank you. I am glad you liked the story. After all that John had gone through, there really needed to be an ending with hope for his future.