Past, Present & Future, Chapter 13

Sep 08, 2011 18:36

Chapter 13: Surprises & Emotions

Yunho was chatting with Jihye in his office when he heard a commotion outside his door. Before he got a chance to stand up and check with his secretary his office door was opened wide and there stood someone with a familiar face holding a bottle of expensive wine and a bouquet white rose.

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dilovesyunjae September 8 2011, 11:55:06 UTC
ehhh...time jump after 2 years...woah, jae is really crazy here. is he gonna die? sorry im blunt but his character here is so not lovable.

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trieze0713 September 9 2011, 02:41:07 UTC
:D He's not going to die... but what happened between the time skip will be revealed little by little in the oncoming chapters! Thank you!

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aoktoga September 8 2011, 12:06:37 UTC
woah jae's life is too chaotic...poor him but he needs to understand that he's not the center of the world and he must learn how to loose his selfish mind

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trieze0713 September 9 2011, 02:41:39 UTC
Indeed, he has to learn to accept the reality before trying to change it :(
Thanks for keep reading so far :)

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ahem_bpoutarawr September 8 2011, 12:14:13 UTC
noo, why so short?? me want more~ hurry, hurry, update :9

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trieze0713 September 9 2011, 02:51:11 UTC
Hurrying myself to finish chapter 14 now :D This chapter is short because I found it hard to find a break if I continue it... The next chapter will be pretty long, that's why :) Thanks for commenting!

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hi_yu September 8 2011, 12:21:32 UTC
okay.
I dont know what to feel after reading this chapter.
first, i feel like kicking your ass for leaving it at that.
secondly I feel like this chapter ended too soon and the pace is faster than the previous chapters.:p
Third.... I think I missed a chapter or two coz the last one I read, Moonbin hasnt moved in to jaejoong's house >_<.

fourth, me no want angst!!!!!!!! T_T T_T T_T... and this chapter kinda making a mess of my heart T_T

but thank you for updating this wonderful fic dear :)

hwaiting

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trieze0713 September 9 2011, 03:27:22 UTC
You're not missing a chapter, it's intended. I'm sorry if you think this chapter is too short because the next chapter might be very long. I found it hard to find a good 'break' in this chapter other than what's posted, otherwise it will drag and too much will be revealed at the same time.

What happened during the time skip will be revealed little by little in the next chapter :)

Thank you for being patient, I really hope we'll have more happy plot nearing it's completion :D

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Poooooor Moonbin falcon2339 September 8 2011, 12:35:04 UTC
Why in the world os MB living with JJ? JJ is so mean towards MB. After all this time, he still didn't learn his lesson. I think his deserves worse that what YH is dishing to him. I think YH is too nice to him already. Why is JJ coughing blood? Don't tell me this is one of those sob stories where the hero dies of terminal disease????? Awwwwwww, please don't do this. Spice this story up but not with a character death.... I am eager to read of how YH will be making JJ suffer......Pile it in....haha......

Anyway, thank you for rushing this out, especially when you have just return from US. Really appreciate it.

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Re: Poooooor Moonbin trieze0713 September 9 2011, 03:34:43 UTC
Relaz dear, I will reveal everything that's happened in the missing years little by little in the next chapter! LOL Am I sadistic or what?

Noooo, he's not going to die or anything, it's just the effect of consuming too much alcohol. It happened to my cousin's friend hahaha No character death yet in any of my plot :D

You think JJ is not suffering enough by now? You're more cruel than myself then! LOL JK bb!

Not rushing, no worries, it's already half done before I leave. That's why I can post it now. Thanks a lot bb, your comment always encourage me to write faster! *hugs*

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